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Mellotron Scratch

Post by Nya-chan Production » Fri May 13, 2011 6:51 pm

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As godix would say, "Such a pretentious piece of shit it didn't win anything anywhere, even though it was sent to many cons."

I still love them. This video as well as godix.

This goes up there, you old fart o/
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Re: Mellotron Scratch

Post by McDirty » Fri May 13, 2011 7:00 pm

Awesome!!! You've now encouraged me to go and finally watch this movie! :lol:

Keep on editing, I hope this does well at competitions.

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Re: Mellotron Scratch

Post by Phantasmagoriat » Fri May 13, 2011 7:49 pm

I was right. Its Porcupine Tree.

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Re: Mellotron Scratch

Post by Otohiko » Fri May 13, 2011 10:29 pm

Porcupine Tree? This is insta-win :ying:
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/watches the video

Slow-mo is god.

I wish this video had a first half though. I can't help but think that it sort of started in the middle of itself, and a pre-stabby set-up of some sort certainly would've helped the dramatic effect.
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Re: Mellotron Scratch

Post by CodeZTM » Fri May 13, 2011 11:02 pm

Holy shit. Why don't you edit more? XD

Such a simplistic AMV, but it still had a very profound statement to make and did it in a very interesting way. I didn't like the oval shaped overlay thing at the end, but I get what it was trying to do, and it was actually really touching.

But I will echo what Otohiko said. It was weird to have the death scene so early, without any sort of reasoning behind it. Even in the latter parts, there wasn't any real reasoning behind why he tried to kill her. Other than him being an obsessive creeper, which I guess would work. But then again, you've got the girl biting the crap out of him too. XD In short, I think the focus could have been tweaked a little for a better effect on the story.

Still, I really really dug it. :up:

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Re: Mellotron Scratch

Post by AimoAio » Sat May 14, 2011 6:09 am

CodeZTM wrote: But I will echo what Otohiko said. It was weird to have the death scene so early, without any sort of reasoning behind it. Even in the latter parts, there wasn't any real reasoning behind why he tried to kill her. Other than him being an obsessive creeper, which I guess would work. But then again, you've got the girl biting the crap out of him too. XD In short, I think the focus could have been tweaked a little for a better effect on the story.
x2. Still, it was pretty awesome to watch! :up:

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Re: Mellotron Scratch

Post by Nya-chan Production » Sat May 14, 2011 7:59 am

Thanks everyone :>

You can die anytime without a reason, do you know? ^^ Maybe Kyon in this vid didn't know as well... nah, just excusing myself, you are probably right... thanks again, everyone XD
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Re: Mellotron Scratch

Post by Chiiisus » Sat May 14, 2011 8:51 am

Him dying at the start didn't feel weird to me. xD;;
Like, to me it felt like he was looking back on how he got there and then he died. It was kind of like his eyes were closing? XD I unno. -Fail- That's just me though. I really liked it. :up:
I totally agree, you should edit more. ;__;
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Re: Mellotron Scratch

Post by pan_dbgt01 » Thu May 19, 2011 12:07 am

Wow....so clean and refreshing....

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Re: Mellotron Scratch

Post by Chained(E)Studio » Fri May 27, 2011 1:02 pm

Liked it =3
Thought the beginning started of good for me anyways, kinda like gives a nice awakenning to watch the amv =D!
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