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EtherealBlu
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1:1 First AMV!

Post by EtherealBlu » Tue May 10, 2011 5:36 pm

Hello, friends! Well, this is the first AMV I've ever made and I must say, I rather like it. However, as an artist I am always looking for ways to improve my skills, so any constructive criticism would be much appreciated. Hope you enjoy it! :)

WARNING! Possible spoilers in the vid! So if you haven't seen Trigun, go watch it first!

Alright, so I noticed there is something wrong with the audio in the preview just in the beginning. o.O Theres this annoying buzzing going on in the opening "credits". It doesn't seem to be in the download, just the preview. Should I ask them to take it down so I can re-upload it?

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Dragon/Roy
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Re: 1:1 First AMV!

Post by Dragon/Roy » Tue May 10, 2011 8:34 pm



there's my vid , and ill leave u some feedback soon :D

Koontzie
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Re: 1:1 First AMV!

Post by Koontzie » Thu May 26, 2011 1:52 pm

Heres my first upload to a-m-v.org



I got a 1 star that I didnt think was very fair...perhaps I should cut the begining if it really matters. Id like some feedback pls.

Ill check yours out!

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Re: 1:1 First AMV!

Post by Koontzie » Thu May 26, 2011 2:05 pm

Nice Song Choice! I liked the lyrics matching some images. Good job. Just noticed a few cuts coulf have been more on beat.

Keep it up :up:

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lloyd9988
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Re: 1:1 First AMV!

Post by lloyd9988 » Tue May 31, 2011 11:02 pm

EtherealBlu wrote:Hello, friends! Well, this is the first AMV I've ever made and I must say, I rather like it. However, as an artist I am always looking for ways to improve my skills, so any constructive criticism would be much appreciated. Hope you enjoy it! :)

WARNING! Possible spoilers in the vid! So if you haven't seen Trigun, go watch it first!

Alright, so I noticed there is something wrong with the audio in the preview just in the beginning. o.O Theres this annoying buzzing going on in the opening "credits". It doesn't seem to be in the download, just the preview. Should I ask them to take it down so I can re-upload it?

I really enjoyed the concept that you were trying to portray. Though, it is hard to notice at first, it begins to show later and later in the video. My criticism would have to be to follow the beat more often and add like a "Black Out" effect. Like, when I heard the *boom* *boom* in the video (the Drum beat), I was kinda hoping for a black out effect to follow. You did keep the timing simple but that kinda works as a double edged sword in this video. Also, though the concept that you were trying to portray was becoming a bit clearer by the minute, I kinda felt like it wasn't clear enough or I was just left wondering what happened, if that makes sense. As a first time AMV, I'm impressed, keep up the good work and have fun :up:

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