[Shynigamii Media] - The Final Getsuga Tensho

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[Shynigamii Media] - The Final Getsuga Tensho

Post by Shynigami » Tue Mar 01, 2011 12:13 am

Hey guys! I'm a new user to this fantastic site and watching all these cool videos inspired me to make my own AMV!



I hope everyone enjoys it!


- Over 30 Video Clips
- Video Clips edited to match Song Lyrics
- Sound Effects used from original video to add Percussion to the song
- 11 Hours of Editing / Clipping
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Re: [Shynigamii Media] - The Final Getsuga Tensho

Post by bladedude101 » Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:30 am

:up:

Best Amv Ever!
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Re-Evolution Studios plus Chiikaboom. We're taking our frickin' Cookies bitches!
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Re: [Shynigamii Media] - The Final Getsuga Tensho

Post by big boss93 » Tue Mar 01, 2011 9:30 am

An advice: Use Raw episodes.
It was a noob amv, but don't worry, it's normal, you'll get better by following other amv maker's advices and reading some guides :bzz: :bzz2:

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Re: [Shynigamii Media] - The Final Getsuga Tensho

Post by Shynigami » Tue Mar 01, 2011 1:04 pm

big boss93 wrote:An advice: Use Raw episodes.
It was a noob amv, but don't worry, it's normal, you'll get better by following other amv maker's advices and reading some guides :bzz: :bzz2:


What makes it a "noob video" ? Please, if you're going to critisise, state a reason behind it.

P.S. The only place with sub titles is at the end, and that was intentional.

bladedude101 wrote::up:

Best Amv Ever!
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Thanks alot for my 1st nice comment!

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Re: [Shynigamii Media] - The Final Getsuga Tensho

Post by big boss93 » Tue Mar 01, 2011 2:21 pm

So, that's my opinion. The amv was too slow, the timing wasn't very good, there was lip flap, and i don't like subs or tv logos. It wasn't original and i didn't enjoy watching it, i just got bored. That's all i can say :wink:

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Re: [Shynigamii Media] - The Final Getsuga Tensho

Post by EkaCoralian » Tue Mar 01, 2011 4:34 pm

Yeah at first I was gonna say get rid of subs but I realized it was intentional by the end.

I thought this was fairly decent: I liked your clip choices to match the song. Unofortunately though, while the clips did match the song at points, its not really a Bleach song: moreso, it was a slow'ish song in comparison to the fight scenes. And while I have to give you credit for not reusing clips since you only used like one episode, I don't think it was a great idea to make a whole AMV off of one episode: sort of takes away from the surprise the viewers get in my opinion. When I saw the title I knew it was probably just going to be of the one episode, so that put me off a little. :\

But for everything else, its pretty well-done. Nice for a first. :up:
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Re: [Shynigamii Media] - The Final Getsuga Tensho

Post by Shynigami » Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:07 pm

EkaCoralian wrote:Yeah at first I was gonna say get rid of subs but I realized it was intentional by the end.

I thought this was fairly decent: I liked your clip choices to match the song. Unofortunately though, while the clips did match the song at points, its not really a Bleach song: moreso, it was a slow'ish song in comparison to the fight scenes. And while I have to give you credit for not reusing clips since you only used like one episode, I don't think it was a great idea to make a whole AMV off of one episode: sort of takes away from the surprise the viewers get in my opinion. When I saw the title I knew it was probably just going to be of the one episode, so that put me off a little. :\

But for everything else, its pretty well-done. Nice for a first. :up:

Hi, thanks for the feedback! Actually, I used clips from 2 Episodes, about 2 minutes worth from each, but I'll try more next time to make them better. Thanks again for everyone's opinions!

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Re: [Shynigamii Media] - The Final Getsuga Tensho

Post by Kireblue » Tue Mar 01, 2011 7:36 pm

Let me just say that this was a good first attempt. And its at least better than my first DBZ AMV which I made about five years ago :sweat: .
Usually when I review someone's first video, I lay off on the criticism in order to not discourage them, but I do want to give you advice on improving.
I'd say that this AMV just lacks beat and internal sync. This guide does a great job at explaining it (along with a bunch of other things). Its really long though http://www.animemusicvideos.org/forum/v ... =2&t=92942

In a nutshell, it seems that you just placed scenes on your timeline without considering when they ended in relation to the beats, rhythm and lyrics of the song. Matching your clips to the rhythm of the song gives your video flow and keeps your audience interested and focused on your video. Think about clapping your hands to the rhythm of the song. The points where you clap at are generally good points to either switch to a new scene or have some kind of new action happen in your video. This is why a full length AMV can sometimes need footage from a dozen episodes or more.

Once again, good job on you first attempt :up: , and don't get discouraged by negative comments. Oh and, welcome to the org.
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Re: [Shynigamii Media] - The Final Getsuga Tensho

Post by Shynigami » Fri Mar 11, 2011 10:12 pm

Thanks for all the advice everyone! I know I have alot to learn but hopefully I can make a video that everyone will enjoy!

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Re: [Shynigamii Media] - The Final Getsuga Tensho

Post by CorpseGoddess » Sat Mar 12, 2011 3:27 am

Shynigami wrote:Thanks for all the advice everyone! I know I have alot to learn but hopefully I can make a video that everyone will enjoy!
Welcome to the Org. My best piece of advice? Forget making a video that everyone will enjoy---make the videos that you will enjoy. That is when you will be successful. :up:
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