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by Kireblue » Tue Mar 01, 2011 6:53 pm
The font that you used and the amount of text that you had on the screen at one time wasn't very appealing. It probably would have looked better if you had faded in and out small parts of each sentence at a time. Also, the pace of the song and video seem a bit fast for such a dark concept. And I think that everything would have been more believable if you had gave Jose the "devil eyes" and tried to portray him in a more ominous light. But even so, it was a very nice idea. I just think that it could have been executed a little better.