
It was my firts AMV contest and I failed. (I think >.>)
I started on Monday (the last day of Iron Chef 07), because I have got many problems with VirtualDub.
So I have been really out of time, but still I tried my best.
Hope you little enjoy it. ^^"
Thanks!CodeZTM wrote:I thought you did a pretty good job.
A few minor things though:
1) Watch lip flap.
2) Stay focued on what you're doing. This was supposed to be a romance amv, but you had a whole segment dedicated to fuko and her sister's deal. Stick with the couple.
3) You had a REALLY FUNKY song shift around 1:47. It was distracting. IF you plan on cutting a song, make sure and cut it in a manner that is audially appealing.
4) The AMV needed more "kick" during the chorus. While I know that the series isn't exactly action-oritented like bleach is, I think a little more movement or action with the characters during the chorus would do you a better job.
Overall, nice job though. I hope I see more.
Yeah that caught me off guard a lot :3CodeZTM wrote: 3) You had a REALLY FUNKY song shift around 1:47. It was distracting. IF you plan on cutting a song, make sure and cut it in a manner that is audially appealing.
Yep. Whatever, I'll go play minesweeper.Chained(E)Studio wrote:Yeah that caught me off guard a lot :3CodeZTM wrote: 3) You had a REALLY FUNKY song shift around 1:47. It was distracting. IF you plan on cutting a song, make sure and cut it in a manner that is audially appealing.
But Nice-ish![]()
IC's can be a bit hard sometimes, I've never entered an Mega Iron Chef though, just litte "Hey you friend, IC me now stuff."
Thanks !EkaCoralian wrote:Aw, how cute. :'D Liked this a lot. ^_^ I thought the transition to Fuko's bit was a tad out of place (though it fit the lyrics, its mainly a TomoNagi video, so... yeah), but otherwise I liked. :33