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ReD K@iSeR
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Touches AMV

Post by ReD K@iSeR » Sun Nov 07, 2010 5:43 pm

Hi Everyone
well.... I am New in making AMV's and this is my First AMV
My Name is Tareq and I am From Saudi Arabia and i hope to have a good time with you guys

and please tell me what you think hounstly about my AMV :rofl:

Information About the AMV :

Name: Touches
Length: 3:18
Type: MP4 (1280 x 720)
Music: Basic Element - Touch You Right Now
Animes:
1- Clannad
2- Clannad After Story
3- Rosario + Vampire Capu2
4- ef - a tale of memories

Program used: Pinnacle Studio 14 HD

I Hope You Like It :sweat:
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=179278

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Re: Touches AMV

Post by AimoAio » Mon Nov 08, 2010 7:23 am

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[vidid]179278[/vidid]
^ gives:



Saves ya typing out everything, also a local download link would be nice. ^^

/ghets

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Re: Touches AMV

Post by AimoAio » Mon Nov 08, 2010 8:17 am

For a first AMV that was pretty good. You got most the basic stuff right, though I'd some improvement here and there won't hurt :P

1.Ok, I finally understood why you didn't upload it to local. 131MB is a tad big :\ I'm guessing this is because you didn't compress using Zarxgui to get your MP4 but rendered it straight out your editing program? Having a read at this might help. If you still have any questions then don't hesitate to ask me.

2.Did you upscale this? Because I don't know if it's just my eyes or not but I was seeing jaggies everywhere o__o For help on getting rid of them, see this guide here. Also bit of blockiness in a few parts but that can be easily removed using some filters in the guide I mentioned.

3.Sync was pretty good for a first AMV, I'd say some more dynamics would be much better though because the video felt very static at places for a Dancey-type video, especially the EF parts. There was quite a lot of lip flap though but then we all have problems with that and since you're a beginner I wouldn't hassle you much about it ;)

4.Editing, some weird scene selection but I'd say most of it was...fairly ok. Didn't see the point in the text at the beginning[which was a little off timed too] and the noise fx around 1:08. Just felt outta place. Pacing was quite slow at parts.

5.This is just me being super nitpicky but I think the vid would have ended nicer if it was on the scene with the paper aeroplane flying off rather than at Renji staring at the sky. :rofl:

Overall, not bad for a first. Keep it up! :up: Also welcome to the org! :dino:

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