I was kind of disappointed. But it's a good disappointing, if that makes sense.
*The editing was FANTASTIC. The sync was great, the flow and feel of it was right on track, and the only thing that was really out of place was the band scenes.
*The concept was the biggest thing I had issues with. The AMV was really lacking a focus. When you've got a song and cut it as short as you did, you can't let a concept/story meander around as much as it did. We've got Angel Battles, we've got band scenes, and we've got parental abuse. Keeping focus on one aspect [in my eyes, the struggle between angel/characters and focusing on the Oto's "heart" throughout the entire story would have been really deep] is important when you've got not much time to put a lot into something.
*The song cut made me sadders. :_( I wanted to see MOAR. The editing was so great up to that point,and the multi-concept thing you were going with could have probably worked had it been spread out and gotten the other characters involved!
I was really impressed. Your first post on the org definitely knocked it out of the park, and I'll be
stalking err.... Waiting for your videos in the future.
4/5