"K-oh" ~ Super Girly K-on Moe AMV

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"K-oh" ~ Super Girly K-on Moe AMV

Post by OtakuGray » Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:17 pm

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Kaream: "Generally, this video was enjoyable, and pretty cute."
Me: "i hereby dub this amv "the cute one that didnt make it :>"
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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Re: "K-oh" ~ Super Girly K-on Moe AMV

Post by Enigma » Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:20 pm

Kawaiii


Edit: Disturbing.
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Re: "K-oh" ~ Super Girly K-on Moe AMV

Post by Jeff » Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:21 pm

Enigma wrote:Kawaiii
desu ne >///<

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Re: "K-oh" ~ Super Girly K-on Moe AMV

Post by LeX » Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:21 pm

Enigma wrote:Kawaiii
piano? :|

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Re: "K-oh" ~ Super Girly K-on Moe AMV

Post by LeX » Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:22 pm

projekt wrote:
Enigma wrote:Kawaiii
desu ne >///<
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Re: "K-oh" ~ Super Girly K-on Moe AMV

Post by LeX » Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:25 pm

hm okey then about the Video.

I'm very proud that finally i can rate one of your Videos high.

I liked it but i dunno about the lip synchro looked laggy for me :uhoh:

The only think i hated were the masks and then behind that strong blur :uhoh:

I will give you 4/5 :mrgreen:

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Re: "K-oh" ~ Super Girly K-on Moe AMV

Post by OtakuGray » Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:33 pm

LeXxX wrote:
projekt wrote:
Enigma wrote:Kawaiii
desu ne >///<
Jeffzilla
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godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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Re: "K-oh" ~ Super Girly K-on Moe AMV

Post by OtakuGray » Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:34 pm

LeXxX wrote:hm okey then about the Video.

I'm very proud that finally i can rate one of your Videos high.

I liked it but i dunno about the lip synchro looked laggy for me :uhoh:

The only think i hated were the masks and then behind that strong blur :uhoh:

I will give you 4/5 :mrgreen:
YAY |:> A high rating! *Celebrates* :bzz:
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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Re: "K-oh" ~ Super Girly K-on Moe AMV

Post by CodeZTM » Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:56 pm

Reminds me a tad of Ike Ike, just a lot slower and without the DDR arrows. XD

The video was listed as "fun", so I can forgive the lack of clear conceptuality, but there are just a few things I'd suggest to work on.

1) :04-16 : If you're going to really lip sync, I suggest taking the time to mask out the lips and sync it properly. As is, it was just kind of passively hitting the words. Or, if it was lip flap, I'd edit it out entirely.
2) 1:03-1:09 : Seemed like effects thrown in for the sake of effects. It kind of didn't match the flow [at least for me], and the static images didn't develop the story for me personally. I can say the same thing for the effect at :24 - :30.
3) Overall, I'd work on scene selection a tad. The sparkly beach scene was actually a really cute segment of editing and the pink squirly bit and the very end actually wasn't all that bad either.
4) /still has issues with font
5) Speaking of the text, I kind of was disappointed it was only integrated at that one point. To me, the video could have had a whole nother' scene there and could have developed it better. AimoAimi does text effects REALLY well, at least in my opinion, so check her out a bit. :D

Overall, VAST improvements from your previous videos. Still just needs a tad more polishing and it'd be really awesome. :D

3.50/5.00

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