Bleach AMV "Vengeance"

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Bleach AMV "Vengeance"

Post by Alt_z3 » Mon Jul 26, 2010 6:49 pm

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Hello again:) This year for sure is the best year in editing for me. Another amv finished. Again lets look closer at Bleach XD

Concept:

I wanted to do an amv about Hirako Shinji for a long time but the available episodes just weren't enough. Recent episodes just did the trick. They were exactly what the doctor ordered. With them I could complete my story. The amv shows the conflict between Aisen and Shinji, focusing on the second one. I even tried to create an inner shinji hollow who talks to hirako in the dramatic moments. So basicilly I invite you for a sad story, showing why Hirako hates so much Aizen.

Here is youtube link if you want to preview it: -->click<--
cheers :bzz:
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Re: Bleach AMV "Vengeance"

Post by AimoAio » Mon Jul 26, 2010 7:10 pm

I am totally getting this because I really enjoyed your "Emptiness" video :up:

Edit: Didn't enjoy it much but the editing was not bad I suppose, it was kinda lacking in something...maybe I was expecting it to be more like "Emptiness" so yeah. But I like your editing so I'm looking forward to some more from you :)
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Re: Bleach AMV "Vengeance"

Post by Orestes » Tue Jul 27, 2010 5:57 am

I didn't really dig the twitch on some parts at all, but still it was an alright edit.
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Re: Bleach AMV "Vengeance"

Post by Kireblue » Tue Jul 27, 2010 7:25 am

I didn't really like this video. I feel that your scene selection was a little too random, and I couldn't really find a connection between the song and the anime. Oh and, I don't think that people who haven't seen Bleach could understand the events that happened in your AMV.

The reason why I loved "Emptiness" so much was because of the song and anime choice. I felt that the song matched Ulquiorra absolutely perfectly, and the lack of a story actually helped the viewer focus on the video's emotional appeal. This video didn't really do that. Oh and, I think that you would have benefited from waiting for the Vizard fight to finish. One reason why I feel that Bleach AMVs have a bad reputation is that whenever something cool happens in the series, too many people almost immediately make AMVs with footage from that episode instead of waiting for more scenes to become available. I'm positive that the upcoming fight between Aizen and Shinji will have some scenes that would've made this AMV better.

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Re: Bleach AMV "Vengeance"

Post by xandercorp » Tue Jul 27, 2010 7:54 am

Video Copilot much? I feel that bleach has been over used when it comes to amvs, or let's say abused, there are too many using the same damn scenes. Yours seems ok, but AE + Bleach a good AMV do not make. It's not above average in my opinion. But don't get discouraged, I'm sure others feel differently.

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Re: Bleach AMV "Vengeance"

Post by irriadin » Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:21 am

I liked it, nice effects usage and whatnot. Scene selection was as good as it could have been, though perhaps if you waited a bit longer you could have gotten some better footage. (I'm not sure where the Bleach anime is since I only read the manga.) The music was... passable... I think a different song could have elevated this video into something truly great. That being said, nice work.

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Re: Bleach AMV "Vengeance"

Post by Kosmit » Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:25 pm

I fell in love with Emptiness. This one lacks its' impact and soul, Vengeance just feels a bit... empty. Gotta admire the technicals though.

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Re: Bleach AMV "Vengeance"

Post by Alt_z3 » Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:53 pm

HazeFM wrote:I didn't really dig the twitch on some parts at all, but still it was an alright edit.
Thanks you checked it. The twitch effect was added to simulate the hollow effect which is used in the bleach show.
kireblue wrote:I didn't really like this video. I feel that your scene selection was a little too random, and I couldn't really find a connection between the song and the anime. Oh and, I don't think that people who haven't seen Bleach could understand the events that happened in your AMV.

The reason why I loved "Emptiness" so much was because of the song and anime choice. I felt that the song matched Ulquiorra absolutely perfectly, and the lack of a story actually helped the viewer focus on the video's emotional appeal. This video didn't really do that. Oh and, I think that you would have benefited from waiting for the Vizard fight to finish. One reason why I feel that Bleach AMVs have a bad reputation is that whenever something cool happens in the series, too many people almost immediately make AMVs with footage from that episode instead of waiting for more scenes to become available. I'm positive that the upcoming fight between Aizen and Shinji will have some scenes that would've made this AMV better.
Well the waiting for the episodes is the pain in the ass. When I found this song, the plot was practically completed in my head. You are probably right that the episodes in 3, 4 or more weeks would benefit this amv. Emptiness was like drama with action. Vengeance in the concept was the oposite, action with some drama. Thanks kireblue for your opinion. Year theory about bleach amv is probably good. I agree with it.
xandercorp wrote:Video Copilot much?
yeah I used twitch from video copilot and? I am worse then someone or what? You pointed that fact like it was something bad.
xandercorp wrote:I feel that bleach has been over used when it comes to amvs, or let's say abused, there are too many using the same damn scenes. Yours seems ok, but AE + Bleach a good AMV do not make. It's not above average in my opinion. But don't get discouraged, I'm sure others feel differently.
I have the same feelings about many various anime amv that are realesed nowadays. That everyone has the same epic scenes in different order, but it doesn't mean that those amvs are bad. You are just typecasting bleach amvs into a worse category in my opinion.
irriadin wrote:I liked it, nice effects usage and whatnot. Scene selection was as good as it could have been, though perhaps if you waited a bit longer you could have gotten some better footage. (I'm not sure where the Bleach anime is since I only read the manga.) The music was... passable... I think a different song could have elevated this video into something truly great. That being said, nice work.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. :pizza:
Kosmit wrote:I fell in love with Emptiness. This one lacks its' impact and soul, Vengeance just feels a bit... empty. Gotta admire the technicals though.
Thanks Kosmit:) it is just like I written to kireblue. Those two amvs had different concepts on what to show. I wanted Vengeance to be pure action AMV :bzz2:
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Re: Bleach AMV "Vengeance"

Post by Mol » Wed Jul 28, 2010 6:19 am

I guess main point about using twitch would be: not original :uhoh: anyway it wasn't that bad i liked how you used effects, well maybe that grunge thing wasn't best choice, but it was ok |:>
Still better than that MMO.
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Re: Bleach AMV "Vengeance"

Post by Sayco » Sat Jul 31, 2010 7:19 am

Woo finally have some time :P to write smth :) You know how I like Bleach vid so I generally enjoy it :up: IMO Empiteness was much better then this one ;) Nice idea with Shinji story :up: like this character :)
Generally quite good amv :amv:
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