Kuroshitsuji (black butler) season 2 AMV

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Kuroshitsuji (black butler) season 2 AMV

Post by sakura103193 » Sat Jul 24, 2010 3:21 pm

MY NEWEST AMV: Kuroshitsuji season 2 opening AMV

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=177543

Hello im new on this site but i've been making amvs for a long time now, so i posted my newest amv so far. I got tired of youtube and so i came here instead. SO PLEAZ LEAVE AN OPINION AND RATE!!!!

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Re: Kuroshitsuji (black butler) season 2 AMV

Post by Kousaka » Sat Jul 24, 2010 4:46 pm

Edits are in bold.

Everyone gets tired of Youtube. lol Including me. 8D

Okay. On to the serious stuff.
I'm not the type to give crit. Although it is useful, I don't have the heart to do it. I'd feel bad.
However, other people (People who have been here WAY longer than me) give crit. (Listen to it. It helps.) It may sound mean at first but it really helps most of the time.

1st of all. Subtitles. They're ugly.

2nd. Your AR scares me. A lot.

3rd. That watermark in the top right corner. Its annoying.

4th. Quality. HD is your friend. Although, I did forget that Kuroshitsuji II is really new. So high quality cannot be acheived with it most likely.

5th. Transitions. There weren't many (or any.)

6th. Is that ANOTHER watermark? At the bottom right.

Um, that's about it. There's probably much more that could be done to make the AMV better. But because of the guilt that I feel ALREADY, I will close off for now.

Fix the things I mentioned and then you can focus on what the other org people tell you.

Btw, were you suspended on Youtube or something? Or is your account name different? I'd like to see your previous AMVs on Youtube. 8D

One more thing. You use WMM, am I correct? You should move on to Sony Vegas Pro if you'd like. Its more professional. Or move on to Final Cut Pro or Adobe After Effects. Something professional.
Last edited by Kousaka on Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Kuroshitsuji (black butler) season 2 AMV

Post by CodeZTM » Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:03 pm

Since you express a desire to improve, I'll get this and leave a detailed opinion here in the next hour or so when I return home.

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Re: Kuroshitsuji (black butler) season 2 AMV

Post by Nya-chan Production » Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:05 pm

TamaHime09 wrote:4th. Quality. HD is your friend.
Not necessarily. Unless she can get original RAWs (which I doubt, and 2nd season DVDs aren't out yet, afaik), her best bet would be downscaling 720p sources to 576 or 480p - looks better, plays better, easier to encode.
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Re: Kuroshitsuji (black butler) season 2 AMV

Post by Kousaka » Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:16 pm

Nya-chan Production wrote:
TamaHime09 wrote:4th. Quality. HD is your friend.
Not necessarily. Unless she can get original RAWs (which I doubt, and 2nd season DVDs aren't out yet, afaik), her best bet would be downscaling 720p sources to 576 or 480p - looks better, plays better, easier to encode.
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Re: Kuroshitsuji (black butler) season 2 AMV

Post by SilkAMV » Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:32 pm

Unfortunately, this is an site for AMVs, not a Kuroshitsuji fansite. Putting only the series and season you used in the title is like a painter hoping people will like his art because he used his favorite color. Not that it isn't useful sometimes but here it's quite obvious that it's just a fan-video. As for the video itself, I think Tama said all that can really be said. A higher level of critique doesn't seem useful for you yet. Just work on the basics of presentation first.
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Re: Kuroshitsuji (black butler) season 2 AMV

Post by sakura103193 » Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:58 pm

TamaHime09 wrote:Edits are in bold.

Everyone gets tired of Youtube. lol Including me. 8D

Okay. On to the serious stuff.
I'm not the type to give crit. Although it is useful, I don't have the heart to do it. I'd feel bad.
However, other people (People who have been here WAY longer than me) give crit. (Listen to it. It helps.) It may sound mean at first but it really helps most of the time.

1st of all. Subtitles. They're ugly.

2nd. Your AR scares me. A lot.

3rd. That watermark in the top right corner. Its annoying.

4th. Quality. HD is your friend. Although, I did forget that Kuroshitsuji II is really new. So high quality cannot be acheived with it most likely.

5th. Transitions. There weren't many (or any.)

6th. Is that ANOTHER watermark? At the bottom right.

Um, that's about it. There's probably much more that could be done to make the AMV better. But because of the guilt that I feel ALREADY, I will close off for now.

Fix the things I mentioned and then you can focus on what the other org people tell you.

Btw, were you suspended on Youtube or something? Or is your account name different? I'd like to see your previous AMVs on Youtube. 8D

One more thing. You use WMM, am I correct? You should move on to Sony Vegas Pro if you'd like. Its more professional. Or move on to Final Cut Pro or Adobe After Effects. Something professional.

Thanks this really helps. i usually only make videos once or twice a year and so never gave much thought in getting a better program, but i am saving money to get sony vegas pro. also, a friend asked me to do this, so i kinda did this quickly...

and yes my account was suspended

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Re: Kuroshitsuji (black butler) season 2 AMV

Post by Kousaka » Sat Jul 24, 2010 8:01 pm

sakura103193 wrote:
TamaHime09 wrote:Edits are in bold.

Everyone gets tired of Youtube. lol Including me. 8D

Okay. On to the serious stuff.
I'm not the type to give crit. Although it is useful, I don't have the heart to do it. I'd feel bad.
However, other people (People who have been here WAY longer than me) give crit. (Listen to it. It helps.) It may sound mean at first but it really helps most of the time.

1st of all. Subtitles. They're ugly.

2nd. Your AR scares me. A lot.

3rd. That watermark in the top right corner. Its annoying.

4th. Quality. HD is your friend. Although, I did forget that Kuroshitsuji II is really new. So high quality cannot be acheived with it most likely.

5th. Transitions. There weren't many (or any.)

6th. Is that ANOTHER watermark? At the bottom right.

Um, that's about it. There's probably much more that could be done to make the AMV better. But because of the guilt that I feel ALREADY, I will close off for now.

Fix the things I mentioned and then you can focus on what the other org people tell you.

Btw, were you suspended on Youtube or something? Or is your account name different? I'd like to see your previous AMVs on Youtube. 8D

One more thing. You use WMM, am I correct? You should move on to Sony Vegas Pro if you'd like. Its more professional. Or move on to Final Cut Pro or Adobe After Effects. Something professional.

Thanks this really helps. i usually only make videos once or twice a year and so never gave much thought in getting a better program, but i am saving money to get sony vegas pro. also, a friend asked me to do this, so i kinda did this quickly...

and yes my account was suspended

You're very welcome :3
Oooo~ Yes. Get Sony Vegas Pro. It helps ever so much.
Oooo~ Yeah. I did enjoy it somewhat due to the fact that I just love Ciel. Alois is cool too though 8"D

Awwwwww. Do you have a new account? D8
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Re: Kuroshitsuji (black butler) season 2 AMV

Post by sakura103193 » Sat Jul 24, 2010 11:46 pm

TamaHime09 wrote:
sakura103193 wrote:
TamaHime09 wrote:Edits are in bold.

Everyone gets tired of Youtube. lol Including me. 8D

Okay. On to the serious stuff.
I'm not the type to give crit. Although it is useful, I don't have the heart to do it. I'd feel bad.
However, other people (People who have been here WAY longer than me) give crit. (Listen to it. It helps.) It may sound mean at first but it really helps most of the time.

1st of all. Subtitles. They're ugly.

2nd. Your AR scares me. A lot.

3rd. That watermark in the top right corner. Its annoying.

4th. Quality. HD is your friend. Although, I did forget that Kuroshitsuji II is really new. So high quality cannot be acheived with it most likely.

5th. Transitions. There weren't many (or any.)

6th. Is that ANOTHER watermark? At the bottom right.

Um, that's about it. There's probably much more that could be done to make the AMV better. But because of the guilt that I feel ALREADY, I will close off for now.

Fix the things I mentioned and then you can focus on what the other org people tell you.

Btw, were you suspended on Youtube or something? Or is your account name different? I'd like to see your previous AMVs on Youtube. 8D

One more thing. You use WMM, am I correct? You should move on to Sony Vegas Pro if you'd like. Its more professional. Or move on to Final Cut Pro or Adobe After Effects. Something professional.

Thanks this really helps. i usually only make videos once or twice a year and so never gave much thought in getting a better program, but i am saving money to get sony vegas pro. also, a friend asked me to do this, so i kinda did this quickly...

and yes my account was suspended

You're very welcome :3
Oooo~ Yes. Get Sony Vegas Pro. It helps ever so much.
Oooo~ Yeah. I did enjoy it somewhat due to the fact that I just love Ciel. Alois is cool too though 8"D

Awwwwww. Do you have a new account? D8
i do but im not going to upload any vids cuz they'll just be removed again and i just have it to keep updated with the people i subscribed

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Re: Kuroshitsuji (black butler) season 2 AMV

Post by Kousaka » Thu Jul 29, 2010 7:56 am

Okay then! Good luck! 8D
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