Eternity
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- AimoAio
- Being elegantly...lazy
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Re: Eternity
Only saw the preview just now but must say...wow
it was beautiful, touching and brilliantly edited! Definitely going to download tomorrow when I have time! ^^
The Good
The red & yellow colouring at the beginning: Really emphasized those scenes although I wasn't too big a fan of the yellow but I'll let that slide since yellow is a happy colour and that's what you were trying to show right?
Lyric syncing: I especially loved the photo at 2:04 although the one at 3:14 could have used a background to make it more realistic though.
Concept & emotion portrayal: Lovely scene selection ^^
The song: I love this song and the part at the beginning where they had the fight and she was all alone tearing up at her poster really made me wanna cry
The Bad
Shatter effect at 4:45 doesn't seem to shatter the full screen :\ I don't know if it was an error or unintentional but I just didn't like it.
The ending with the fanart. Just didn't fit in with the rest imo so I don't really like it sorry.
The credits were...nice but wasn't really necessary tbh.
Truthfully speaking I never really liked Sheyrl & Alto together since I prefer Ranka but this made me see the pairing in a new light and I kinda like them as a pairing now
Definitely a 5/5 from me! Good job! 

The Good

The red & yellow colouring at the beginning: Really emphasized those scenes although I wasn't too big a fan of the yellow but I'll let that slide since yellow is a happy colour and that's what you were trying to show right?
Lyric syncing: I especially loved the photo at 2:04 although the one at 3:14 could have used a background to make it more realistic though.
Concept & emotion portrayal: Lovely scene selection ^^
The song: I love this song and the part at the beginning where they had the fight and she was all alone tearing up at her poster really made me wanna cry

The Bad

Shatter effect at 4:45 doesn't seem to shatter the full screen :\ I don't know if it was an error or unintentional but I just didn't like it.
The ending with the fanart. Just didn't fit in with the rest imo so I don't really like it sorry.
The credits were...nice but wasn't really necessary tbh.
Truthfully speaking I never really liked Sheyrl & Alto together since I prefer Ranka but this made me see the pairing in a new light and I kinda like them as a pairing now


- Enigma
- That jolly ol' bastid
- Joined: Sat Mar 07, 2009 3:55 pm
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- Location: California
Re: Eternity
After months of work you got this done O:
good stuff manu

- Taite
- Joined: Fri Jun 26, 2009 12:33 am
- Location: Colorado
Re: Eternity
I'm really biased because I fucking despise this couple, but I'll be sure not give you crit based on that.
I'm actually not gonna give my crit right now because I'm so damn tired, so I'll edit this later. But all I can say for now is good job, watched all 8 minutes, and it was the only Sheryl x Alto amv I have ever enjoyed (editing-wise and such) 4/5
I'm actually not gonna give my crit right now because I'm so damn tired, so I'll edit this later. But all I can say for now is good job, watched all 8 minutes, and it was the only Sheryl x Alto amv I have ever enjoyed (editing-wise and such) 4/5

- Orestes
- Joined: Wed Jul 16, 2008 2:43 am
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- manijak
- Joined: Sun Sep 17, 2006 3:07 am
Re: Eternity
thx for the comment, glad ya like it.AimoAio wrote:Only saw the preview just now but must say...wowit was beautiful, touching and brilliantly edited! Definitely going to download tomorrow when I have time! ^^
The Good
The red & yellow colouring at the beginning: Really emphasized those scenes although I wasn't too big a fan of the yellow but I'll let that slide since yellow is a happy colour and that's what you were trying to show right?
Lyric syncing: I especially loved the photo at 2:04 although the one at 3:14 could have used a background to make it more realistic though.
Concept & emotion portrayal: Lovely scene selection ^^
The song: I love this song and the part at the beginning where they had the fight and she was all alone tearing up at her poster really made me wanna cry![]()
The Bad![]()
Shatter effect at 4:45 doesn't seem to shatter the full screen :\ I don't know if it was an error or unintentional but I just didn't like it.
The ending with the fanart. Just didn't fit in with the rest imo so I don't really like it sorry.
The credits were...nice but wasn't really necessary tbh.
Truthfully speaking I never really liked Sheyrl & Alto together since I prefer Ranka but this made me see the pairing in a new light and I kinda like them as a pairing nowDefinitely a 5/5 from me! Good job!
Yes, ya guessed it right for colors at the start. Now that ya mendion it, I guess pic at 3:14 could have used some bg but oh well.
I didn't want full screen shatter at that part so yea.
As for the fanart at the end, well there just weren't any good scenes for a climax, actually there were no more scenes I could use. I had like 5 ideas what to do but this seemed like the best out of it so why not.
And I can't finish a vid without fancy credits

thx again
yeaEnigma wrote:After months of work you got this done O:good stuff manu

guess I'm one of the rare who like this couple moreTaite wrote:I'm really biased because I fucking despise this couple, but I'll be sure not give you crit based on that.
I'm actually not gonna give my crit right now because I'm so damn tired, so I'll edit this later. But all I can say for now is good job, watched all 8 minutes, and it was the only Sheryl x Alto amv I have ever enjoyed (editing-wise and such) 4/5

and glad ya like it man
Yea, maybe I'll put it later on, who knowsHazeFM wrote:I enjoyed it, good shit Manu, needs an epic banner though.
thx man, glad ya like itGrooveOn wrote:i really enjoyed this man nice work