Fix the sky a little

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Fix the sky a little

Post by Eion » Sat Apr 03, 2010 7:10 pm



Finally finished this!
took me about 2 weeks to finish
im really happy how this came out and actually proud, i tried new stuff that i havent done before and i think i did a really good job! :D

oh and sorry for the leingth D:

Feel free to criticise and give feedback!

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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by Enigma » Sun Apr 04, 2010 11:30 am

Short, But i guess it was pretty good :up: :down:
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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by Haeresis » Sun Apr 04, 2010 11:47 am

Length is something I usually don't care about but the video seemed too short in my opinion. Felt it could have been longer so it could have had a proper climax and ending. The editing was good though and good job overall for trying to do something that wasn't in your comfort zone.
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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by nommay » Sun Apr 04, 2010 7:26 pm

short but supa epic <33333
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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by Eion » Mon Apr 05, 2010 8:41 pm

Enigma wrote:Short, But i guess it was pretty good :up: :down:
Thanks for watching! :D
Haeresis wrote:Length is something I usually don't care about but the video seemed too short in my opinion. Felt it could have been longer so it could have had a proper climax and ending. The editing was good though and good job overall for trying to do something that wasn't in your comfort zone.
Thank you! :)
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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by Knowname » Mon Apr 05, 2010 9:23 pm

yay! another genesis. Please don't let these see the light of day. Maybe if they were all in an mep together but separately they just feel like some hippy rambling off with some psycho conspiracy. It's like I'm so over effects that I'll just blend some scenes to tripy music and shit out a masterpiece. And what's funnier is that it's pretty much exactly like Niwa-kun's garbage over their. In the end I just do not like these forms of expressions. Sorry.
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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by Niwa » Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:19 pm

Was that even worth mentioning here Ben?

Anyway, the video was pretty good. I don't know about that pitch black sequence at the middle though, it didn't add any extra feeling of the horror. The ending was a bit sudden aswell.

The video was pretty short (oh hai) too , but since it's a birthday thing, I guess it's enough ;p

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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by Cross/fade » Wed Apr 07, 2010 2:28 am

Haeresis wrote:Length is something I usually don't care about but the video seemed too short in my opinion. Felt it could have been longer so it could have had a proper climax and ending. The editing was good though and good job overall for trying to do something that wasn't in your comfort zone.
I agree with the all of this :amv: . The black space somewhere in the middle surprised me a bit ... can't say I liked it.

It was okay for a birthday vid :3
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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by Kitsuner » Wed Apr 07, 2010 2:45 am

Fix the sky? Why? Is it cracked?
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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by mirkosp » Wed Apr 07, 2010 2:46 am

Kitsuner wrote:Fix the sky? Why? Is it cracked?
It does have a fairly big ozone hole...
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