Kenzichu- Teacher's Pet Kodomo No Jikan, 303 Don't Trust Me

[CodeZTM]

omg He could be her father O.O I dont know what to think about it, video quality wasnt the best, but i dont know how the original footage looks like o.o. Overall a good video, but the anime is one, i dont want to watch >_>

That guy is her teacher. And he's trying to get her to stop acting like that. Rin (the little girl) is trying to get the teacher. It's not a hentai however it is controversial. As the story moves on (the manga is alot longer) it deals more with Rin's psychology than her trying to get the Teacher to *ahem* "do her".

Eh. I don't blame FAlcone for his reaction. xD I was the same way until I did a quick wiki of the anime series.

Also, my only real critiques would be:

*Video quality
*pointless effects
*poor masking
*Font choices

[-MD]

Alright. Here ya go.

I really like how you experimenting with effects, masking, and such. The zooms you did were pretty pixilated and it was pretty much the only effect that had me screaming besides the color thing at 1:10-1:11. You need to experiment with the color effects a tad more and know when it looks good or not (I've been playing around with those a bit lately). You may understand what I mean the longer you continue editing lol. Even though some of the other effects felt kind of in the way....I still like how you played around with the editing and had fun with it. Pretty impressive where you put some of your masking and others...naaa. Scene selection wasn't bad. You did some pretty good cutting but at times the footage moved faster than the songs pace Xo And I really don't care too much for font and all heh.

The content in your vid is no different than the stuff in alot of other peoples vids lol I think you have improved alot since you started editing.....you know how most beginning editors make vids and they don't seem....alive....they are more static (a lack in movement). Your videos seem to have more style and movement compared to before and that doesn't seem so long ago. ._.' Not bad kid...keep it up :p

[Kenzichu]

Horray!! Please keep telling me how to improve!!

[Koopiskeva]

Most Improved for '09.

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Resolution isn't higher than 1080, nor is the framerate greater than 60fps. |:

[hasteroth]

Most Improved for '09.

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Resolution isn't higher than 1080, nor is the framerate greater than 60fps. |:

Shush you.

[guy07]

it deals more with Rin's psychology than her trying to get the Teacher to *ahem* "do her".

I think not. The "deep" plot was a excuse to show some loli panties and anyone with half a brain could see that. : /

EDIT:
For improvement, try working in some picture-in-picture and closer scene sync to match lyrics. Like with "i'm not fucking scared of him" .... then u show him smiling. wut? Something more aggressive would be better. Always send final betas to at least 3 ppl you trust editing-wise to avoid quality problems, cheesy effects criticism and the like. Not that i should be talking about bad effects ... lol
2/5

[Nya-chan Production]

Mmmm, not most improved, but definitely going for Rookie there.

5/5 for me, since I know you can't get the top notch quality.

[Bauzi]

This anime somehow scares ne. I'm really not into this pedo sort of thing and yes I read hasteroth's explanation

Editing wise... not bad, but:
Contrast. It needs more contrast. You know the chorus of a song are usualy the best parts of a vid, but here they are the weakest parts for me. The rest was quite well done. It lacks the contrast between normal lines and the chorus. It almost continues the way it was before it. A good example for contrast are the dancing scenes in the middle. The flow of the vid is nice and enjoyable (except the chourus part. The lack of contrast just bugged me). You would have to put in quite a lot of contrast because the song hasn't enough of it.

I think there are also a lot of youth sins in it. Like the typography that didn't made sense, because it only came up in two spots or so. The wiggling stuff that was totaly unnecessary at the first time it appears around 1:50 because I almost didn't noticed the small glitch in the song, but on the other hand it made sense in some other places because they were noticeable... or this red/purple lips scene were you changed the colours all of a sudden. What I mean are the things that will probably dissapear when you gain more experience and style. Those cheedy little things in it...

You also should improve your visual quality too.

eh eh... some nice words at the end: For sure it's really not bad for a beginners work!

Editing wise, there wasnt really anything beyond basic sync

In my opinion it does it in a really good way and more was hardly needed.

[Kenzichu]

i wanted to be the editor who was like nu i don't wanna use effects, but they really help especially with this song. I know i'm still learning, but i have the basics down and i'm playing with effects. maybe some ICs will be cool..hmm~

[Kionon]

Definitely improved.

I liked aspects of it, but I felt the flow was rough. A lot of what Bauzi said is what I generally feel. You took the effects just past the point of where they should have been. The text was probably totally unnecessary, and I didn't like a couple of the scene choices, especially the use of the ending sequence. I also didn't feel the song really portrayed Aoki well. And it was a fairly one-dimensional view of Rin.

Also, so far, I am halfway through the series, and I have seen little that doesn't go on in Japanese schools. Aoki cares about Rin, because as a teacher, of course he is going to care. However, it is very much Rin that is to blame for any reaction that Aoki gives. He is certainly not encouraging her behavior.