Shiawase - Ergo Proxy

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phoenixblood
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Shiawase - Ergo Proxy

Post by phoenixblood » Tue Jul 21, 2009 7:54 am

Video: Shiawase
Anime: Ergo Proxy
Song: Shiawase ni Narou
Artist: Utada Hikaru
Category: Other, Romance, Sentimental
Creator: phoenixblood

This is my second amv. I would have liked to have had more time to iron it out and tweak the cuts a bit, but that's life. I wanted to do something with a more literal storyline than is typical for amv's, so hopefully that worked well enough. I also wasn't sure exactly where it should be categorized. It's not exactly romantic or sentimental, but it doesn't really fit anywhere else either since it's a little too light-hearted in places for drama I think. It's mainly about Vincent and Re-l's developing relationship in general - discovering each of their destinies and their dual natures - with tiny tiny bits of romance thrown here and there.

Feel free to leave a comment here or on the video to let me know what you think. Thanks! :mrgreen:

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Post by NightMistress85 » Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:12 am

I think you used the clips very well here. You used pretty much every clip you could from that series to seem at all romantic, giving off a different, but effective tone to the video compared to the series. Song choice was good. Sort of refreshing. If you don't know the words it's up to you to make the clips interesting and I'd say you did. I think the editing itself could use polish (which I think will come with making more videos) and the clips could go with the beat a little better. All in all I'd say it's good and a step in the right direction. I do think however that this is the kind of video you will need to watch multiple times to appreciate more. Keep it up! :up:

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