Kokoro no suushiki

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Kokoro no suushiki

Post by niwatori » Thu Jul 16, 2009 9:14 am

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Video: Kokoro no suushiki 
Category: Romance
Anime:Tiger x Dragon (TV)
Song: saidai kouyakusuu
Artist: RADWIMPS
Creator:Niwatori


"Kokoro no suushiki" (ココロの数式) means "The numerical formula of the heart"

I likened the feelings of the character to mathematics and expressed it.

This AMV is development along the song. So I think you enjoy it more when
you understand Japanese.

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Re: Kokoro no suushiki

Post by Minimoto » Thu Jul 16, 2009 3:11 pm

このAMVをとても大好きです。

一つの問題がある2:24-2:26の変わり目、突然違う事をしました。
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Re: Kokoro no suushiki

Post by Lirinis » Thu Jul 16, 2009 7:51 pm

I likened the feelings of the character to mathematics and expressed it.
I can hardly see any connection with mathematics. Yet I understand only few words from the lyrics, I think I can guess what the song could be about. %-) The video needs something more explicit on the theme of numbers to show up on the screen.
Without it the visual concept is rather weak and cannot really draw attention, same with commonplace scene choices.

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Re: Kokoro no suushiki

Post by Koys » Fri Jul 17, 2009 2:08 am

Yeah good work :up:
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Re: Kokoro no suushiki

Post by AimoAio » Fri Jul 17, 2009 4:35 am

You know what...I actually quite like this :up:

I don't know if it was the effects,the editing or the simple fact it's Toradora.It was just nice to watch.Had a nice warm fuzzy feeling ^^

Although I should point out that the only bit of Japanese I could understand was the part where she said she won't be able to stay by his side anymore(because I've practically memorized it from my TD video)The rest was pretty much ??? So some kind of subtitle/translation of the lyrics and the voiceovers would be nice.

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Re: Kokoro no suushiki

Post by VIDOK » Fri Jul 17, 2009 5:20 am

This is an amazing clip! Great! I really liked it ))) :up: :up: :up: :up: :up:
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Re: Kokoro no suushiki

Post by FunStorm » Fri Jul 17, 2009 7:03 pm

For me it's like 50-50 ... It had really nice and clear footage and effects, sync was pretty good. But on the other hand it was very monotonous, there were many clips where i did not felt atmospere and also those many-times-moving lips were annoying.
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Re: Kokoro no suushiki

Post by niwatori » Sun Jul 19, 2009 10:07 am

Thank you for significant comment.

After all I thought that the element of something may have been necessary a little more. 

I want to make AMV in reference to this opinion from now on.



貴重なご意見ありがとうございます。

やはりもう少し、なにかしらの要素は必要だったかもしれませんね。

今回の意見を参考にこれからもAMVを作っていきたいと思います。

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Re: Kokoro no suushiki

Post by Niotex » Tue Jul 21, 2009 9:14 pm

I saw this a while back on nicovideo and YT. I'm surprised to see it posted here to be honest. While I enjoyed it there are a lot of things wrong with the video. Mainly the fact that it doesn't stick with one style but tries to enforce multiple gimmicks.

Still love it for the sake of ToraDora! though.
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Re: Kokoro no suushiki

Post by Tearx » Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:19 pm

hmmmm. I didn't like some of it but once around 2:00 I really started to enjoy this.
We needed moar ToraDora amvs around here so thank you ;3
Oh, and Inko FTW.
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