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Rock Bird
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Re: Time
Not your typical TokiShoujo vid, I will give you that.
I found the song and the editing to be incredibly painful. Good. Appropriate. But painful. The video has no review for me because I can't stand to watch it again. Not to say I wasn't interested in it while I watched it. I am sure there are plenty of people here who will be able to handle the editing. I can't watch their videos more than once either. I'll just leave it at the fact I liked the concept, thought it was well executed, and have zero interest in subjecting myself to it ever again. I think that's a net positive.
I found the song and the editing to be incredibly painful. Good. Appropriate. But painful. The video has no review for me because I can't stand to watch it again. Not to say I wasn't interested in it while I watched it. I am sure there are plenty of people here who will be able to handle the editing. I can't watch their videos more than once either. I'll just leave it at the fact I liked the concept, thought it was well executed, and have zero interest in subjecting myself to it ever again. I think that's a net positive.
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dazza1008
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Re: Time
I... haven't watched this anime. >.>
But I get the general gist that a girl dies and then something happens.
Anyway, I thought you had the "cutting in offbeat ways to maintain interest" editing style down pat.
But it got a bit repetitive - as in seeing it over and over reduced its effect - so things you could do to break the monotony? I noticed there were zero effects in it - anything basic (except I generally hate it when a basic effect is used throughout the AMV - remember, we're trying to break the monotony) - and with the weird colours when she's falling in that clock thing, you could have changed the hue so it's different. The other thing is that there's an almost unwritten rule that you shouldn't reuse footage, at least too often. Maybe your hands were tied in this, but at least try to do something to the footage to make it a bit different.
Also, visuals were weird, so that was interesting.
And I liked the music - kind of grand with the woman singing loudly - fits the grand theme of... whatever the plot is in the anime. <.<
But I get the general gist that a girl dies and then something happens.
Anyway, I thought you had the "cutting in offbeat ways to maintain interest" editing style down pat.
But it got a bit repetitive - as in seeing it over and over reduced its effect - so things you could do to break the monotony? I noticed there were zero effects in it - anything basic (except I generally hate it when a basic effect is used throughout the AMV - remember, we're trying to break the monotony) - and with the weird colours when she's falling in that clock thing, you could have changed the hue so it's different. The other thing is that there's an almost unwritten rule that you shouldn't reuse footage, at least too often. Maybe your hands were tied in this, but at least try to do something to the footage to make it a bit different.
Also, visuals were weird, so that was interesting.
And I liked the music - kind of grand with the woman singing loudly - fits the grand theme of... whatever the plot is in the anime. <.<
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Rock Bird
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Re: Time
In the anime, the girl doesn't die, I changed the plot to make it seem like that, because I wanted to make it a bit different from the original plot. I know some things are a bit repetitive, but I wanted to make the effect by using no effect if it make any sense. Anyhow, you're damn right with the monotony part, I got distracted with the plot part, and didn't noticed the other errors...thanks for reminding me that an amv means more than plot. ^^
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