emmmm hi ^^...I'm new and this is my amv ^^'

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RadicalRuggy
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Re: emmmm hi ^^...I'm new and this is my amv ^^'

Post by RadicalRuggy » Sat Jan 03, 2009 6:44 am

NerdStrudel wrote:I'm always happy to help a newcomer if they aren't a complete idiot, and you catalogged the vid so you aren't a complete idiot, I'll edit later with what I think of the vid,

edit: good for a first vid, the only part I had a problem with was the buildup part. It was buildup so you don't want tons of unnecessary things happening during that part, but in this song you needed to have a little more going on to give a better since of the chaotic vibe you were trying to portray.


very thanks ^_^

help is welcome ^_^... when you can suggest me other things to make better amv's ^_^

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Re: emmmm hi ^^...I'm new and this is my amv ^^'

Post by Lig8htYagami9 » Sat Jan 03, 2009 7:45 am

Animated24 wrote:
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....expecially with the death note scenes.seemed a poor work
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RadicalRuggy is the best in this type of AMV ... You should see other his videos expecially "Blood" and you will say me...

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Re: emmmm hi ^^...I'm new and this is my amv ^^'

Post by 95shiruka » Mon Jan 05, 2009 5:24 am

hi my friend Ruggy!
to be one of your first jobs is really cool!8-)
i liked too much the end!

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Re: emmmm hi ^^...I'm new and this is my amv ^^'

Post by jade_eyed_angel » Mon Jan 05, 2009 2:56 pm

it was definitely horror-like =P
i'll say my biggest issues with it were quality, and that it seemed to slow down toward the end, so it kind of lost momentum. the laughter right by the end was nice. for a first amv it's pretty good, certainly a lot better than my first amv (which should be shot.) =p
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Re: emmmm hi ^^...I'm new and this is my amv ^^'

Post by RadicalRuggy » Tue Jan 06, 2009 7:24 am

jade_eyed_angel wrote:it was definitely horror-like =P
i'll say my biggest issues with it were quality, and that it seemed to slow down toward the end, so it kind of lost momentum. the laughter right by the end was nice. for a first amv it's pretty good, certainly a lot better than my first amv (which should be shot.) =p

very thanks ^^ I'll do my best to make you proud of me ^_^

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Re: emmmm hi ^^...I'm new and this is my amv ^^'

Post by u_queen » Tue Jan 06, 2009 8:25 am

Hum, welcome to the org ._.
For being your first work in the site I found it pretty well done, the effects at the beginning looked kinda cheap but I'm not anybody to talk you about amazing effects XD. I agree with Animated, Death Note is overused by now so you must show your scenes carefully. At the end it needed more pace and sincying. Overall it was good, but not exactly your first (I saw your profile). Well that's what I found, hope it helps ^o^
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Re: emmmm hi ^^...I'm new and this is my amv ^^'

Post by RadicalRuggy » Thu Jan 08, 2009 6:09 am

u_queen wrote:Hum, welcome to the org ._.
For being your first work in the site I found it pretty well done, the effects at the beginning looked kinda cheap but I'm not anybody to talk you about amazing effects XD. I agree with Animated, Death Note is overused by now so you must show your scenes carefully. At the end it needed more pace and sincying. Overall it was good, but not exactly your first (I saw your profile). Well that's what I found, hope it helps ^o^
yes my first really amv's were a parody on the lord of the rings and bleach ...after that I began to use sony vegas...and this was my first result ^^

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Re: emmmm hi ^^...I'm new and this is my amv ^^'

Post by dokedoke » Fri Jan 09, 2009 7:35 am

yes hello please i am trying to get the video, i am new here please thank you, i try click but the video is not there man, how to view the video? thank man :shock:

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Re: emmmm hi ^^...I'm new and this is my amv ^^'

Post by Master10k » Fri Jan 09, 2009 4:10 pm

I'm also new to AMVs so I know how it feels but I just didn't get this video. I know it's supposed to be a tribute to horror but it felt completely random. Just clips from 3 notoriously violent psychological anime, with some basic effects that only someone on LSD can appreciate. The buildup was good but I could read a thing from the intro. ^_^

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Re: emmmm hi ^^...I'm new and this is my amv ^^'

Post by RadicalRuggy » Sat Jan 10, 2009 5:52 am

dokedoke wrote:yes hello please i am trying to get the video, i am new here please thank you, i try click but the video is not there man, how to view the video? thank man :shock:

I sent you a private message with instruction ^^

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