Yeah, I was going for severely creepy, hence why I used the part of the anime I did. *^_^* I'm hoping that the effects will help a bit, though I can take out some of the demon-ness and change it our for something else. The raping part, I'm assuming you mean at the end.Autraya wrote:@Wurpess - got the beta... now a few comments; I think you've been editing a lot of SOAD -esk music , and it shows, my sister watched it over my shoulder and was creeped out, almost but not to the same extent as that the zaknafien Do'urden vid (sweet dream by marylin manson to the beserk manga)does but it still had that feeling. I haven't seen all of beserk (turned it of out of annoyance and boredom) but uhhh was he being raped by a transvestive in hell? That scene is just repeated too much and it just takes a bit too long to "get somewhere" if you know what I mean? you could make the early scene blurry and with each repeat clearer and have more colour or something...that might help it a bit *shrugs*
Suspence(my spelling sucks this morning) is good this just tipped a little into dragging and replays of demonic faces (perhaps my lack of understanding of the show is responsible). To me it just felt as tho it needed tomove somewhere sooner than it did.
Anyway that's just my initial thoughts (I know it was a rush for the deadline beta so I didn't go too indepth just stayed more about direction and feel of the piece)
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