Death Note - "The Ripper": my first AMV!

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Death Note - "The Ripper": my first AMV!

Post by -Vyse- » Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:34 pm




Yay!
Like i said, it´s my very first AMV. I really put a lot of time and effort in it, and think it cam out quite good. The video itself might be quite okay, that is.
But about ripping and converting stuff... i´m a even bigger Noob.
So, if there are any problems...... forgive my stupidity. At least it should work.

And before you start yelling at me about that, YES, i used the black bars to cover the subs! SORRY!!
Manking AMV´s is nothing more than a (great) hobby, but i a not willing to spend lots of bucks just for the sake of creating one single AMV about that series, i don´t care about the freakin´ better qualitiy. In the end it´s compressed anyway. Sorry again. You may hate me for that.


Now, pleeeeease load my video, and pleeeeease respond with anything you got...!

And, of course,
enjoy =3

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Post by Neverend » Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:05 pm

This was actually really good for a first video!
I would defiantly want to see you progress if you fixed your quality and such :)

My biggest complain was the low opacity clips u had, the white flashes and the lack of originality! Though the concept was abit fun!

Keep on going!

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Post by -Vyse- » Wed Oct 15, 2008 12:48 pm

Yo, thanks for watching+commenting!


Hmmm.... originality? Dunno how to fix that.... well, it´s an fast Death Note action-amv without any effects (that is if you don´c call overlaying an effect). What could i have done differently...?

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Post by Sonydjsnmix » Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:21 pm

That was very good for a first amv. Good ending.

I will agree with Neverend on originality. Although the editing was good it got stagnant halfway through.

As for doing something different on this amv. The overlaying got tiring. Wish there were some more movement to the footage.

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Post by Fuze » Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:55 pm

When I decided to make a Death Note video I wanted to use this song. But...I just took the lyrics "Time Takes Us All" and used it as the title. =P
"He's happy because he's insane."

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Post by jtGz » Thu Oct 16, 2008 8:21 am

Sonydjsnmix wrote: As for doing something different on this amv. The overlaying got tiring. Wish there were some more movement to the footage.
Thats true. And the quality remark as well, there is even interlace. Okay, You didnt wanted to buy DVD but it doesnt excuse You. There are other... ways.

What could You do more to make it more original? That is a question ;). The mix of Death note and this kind of music is long time chewed up and spit out. I dont think there was anything more You could do. But if You would use some kind of effects it could work ;q.

For a first amv its pretty decent.

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