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I'm Not Crazy...

Post by bob_loser » Mon Jul 21, 2008 1:19 am



Well, I'm new and this is my first AMV :oops:
Not much about it :?
But I am really hoping that I can improve due to your comments and such.

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Post by Kionon » Mon Jul 21, 2008 1:30 am

Matchbox 20 get

Dear god that compression is painful.

I like your scene choices, but you need to follow the song a lot better. Your cuts don't flow with the tempo changes in the video. It got better close to the end, as you chose some faster scenes. You still relied way too much on lyric sync, and barely even a little aural sync.

You can do better, and I would like to see the result. The retro style is right up my alley.

Kio liek retro romance.

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Post by bob_loser » Mon Jul 21, 2008 1:59 am

Thanks Kio for the comments and such.
I'll keep working on it to do better in the future.
I guess back to studying the good AMVs :?

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Post by Taokato » Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:02 pm

"i´m not crazy..." XDD funny title
the music bored me, but some parts were very nice
all in all, a nice amv, keep on workin´ dude XD

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Post by Kionon » Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:08 pm

darkmedium wrote:"i´m not crazy..." XDD funny title
the music bored me, but some parts were very nice
all in all, a nice amv, keep on workin´ dude XD
Matchbox 20 bored you?

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Post by bob_loser » Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:27 am

darkmedium wrote:"i´m not crazy..." XDD funny title
the music bored me, but some parts were very nice
all in all, a nice amv, keep on workin´ dude XD
Thanks dark for the comment :D

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Post by nZen » Thu Jul 24, 2008 12:46 pm

i really enjoyed the music
and I've never seen this anime but i thought the scene selection was nice,
all i have to say is work on the flow and get more into the song to build an atmosphere.

well it didn't bore me ill tell you that much
:sweat:

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Post by bob_loser » Thu Jul 24, 2008 3:31 pm

nZen wrote:i really enjoyed the music
and I've never seen this anime but i thought the scene selection was nice,
all i have to say is work on the flow and get more into the song to build an atmosphere.

well it didn't bore me ill tell you that much
:sweat:
Thanks very much Zen, I knew that the flow was kind of off...well a lot really :sweat:

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Post by Shinodude » Sat Jul 26, 2008 3:39 pm

Unwell is definatly one of my favorite songs by Matchbox 20

And I just finished ghost hound about 10 minutes ago and loved it. So dled this video right away.

I can actually see this song fitting. I think you definatly could have done a better job. Some slow fade transitions would have been pretty nice instead of the various hard cuts you have. The pace seems way to far off on the off as well. For a first video tho I think it was nice and I look forward to see improvement.

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Post by bob_loser » Sun Jul 27, 2008 12:28 am

Shinodude wrote:Unwell is definatly one of my favorite songs by Matchbox 20

And I just finished ghost hound about 10 minutes ago and loved it. So dled this video right away.

I can actually see this song fitting. I think you definatly could have done a better job. Some slow fade transitions would have been pretty nice instead of the various hard cuts you have. The pace seems way to far off on the off as well. For a first video tho I think it was nice and I look forward to see improvement.
Thanks Shino, like I said in the past post, I know that the timing was off, and that is something I'm looking forward to improve

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