Shana - Desert Rose [Krisqo]

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Shana - Desert Rose [Krisqo]

Post by Krisqo » Thu Jul 03, 2008 1:33 pm

Sorry... lost my image editor so no fancy pic at the moment :(



Hope you like.


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Post by CodeZTM » Thu Jul 03, 2008 1:39 pm

YAY!

/gets

*most unoriginal title EVER*

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Post by Krisqo » Thu Jul 03, 2008 1:48 pm

CodeChrono wrote:YAY!

/gets

*most unoriginal title EVER*
Yeah... I know... titling has never been a strong point for me... :cry:
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Post by Radical_Yue » Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:26 pm

Krisqo wrote:
CodeChrono wrote:YAY!

/gets

*most unoriginal title EVER*
Yeah... I know... titling has never been a strong point for me... :cry:

That's why you do what I do~ Have other people title it =w=


/me getses




Edit: Interesting stuff, I do like the song and the anime combination (I've always been a fan of the song) but it did seem a tad long.

I wasn't too crazy over the circle cookie cutters and those weird bubble things that went across the screen...

I felt the overall flow and pacing of the video could have been a bit better but I still enjoyed it none the less.


Good to see yer alive :up:

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Post by Autraya » Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:47 pm

I dream of reeEEEEEeeeEEEED eh sorry having sailor mars flashbacks.

Well I'm happy to say that Shana looks nothing like sting did with his 80's 'do in Dune. She uses a blade better than he did too :|
new banzors in the making :p

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Post by CodeZTM » Fri Jul 04, 2008 12:21 am

I love every aspect of the video, except for the bubble stuff like what Yue said. :O

Had good quality, nice sync, interesting audio/video choice, nicely and subtly paced, and was interesting enough to watch a few times through, although it doesn't have the "hook" that other videos have had in the past. :O

Yay. :up:

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Post by Krisqo » Fri Jul 04, 2008 3:06 pm

Radical_Yue wrote:
Krisqo wrote:
CodeChrono wrote:YAY!

/gets

*most unoriginal title EVER*
Yeah... I know... titling has never been a strong point for me... :cry:

That's why you do what I do~ Have other people title it =w=


/me getses




Edit: Interesting stuff, I do like the song and the anime combination (I've always been a fan of the song) but it did seem a tad long.

I wasn't too crazy over the circle cookie cutters and those weird bubble things that went across the screen...

I felt the overall flow and pacing of the video could have been a bit better but I still enjoyed it none the less.


Good to see yer alive :up:
Yes I am alive... somehow...

The cookie cutter was just an experiment and I really didn't know what to put in that part of the song. The same for the bubbles. Just experimenting.

But I'm happy you liked it :P
Autraya wrote: I dream of reeEEEEEeeeEEEED eh sorry having sailor mars flashbacks.

Well I'm happy to say that Shana looks nothing like sting did with his 80's 'do in Dune. She uses a blade better than he did too Neutral
I was wondering when someone would bring up Aluminum.
CodeChrono wrote: I love every aspect of the video, except for the bubble stuff like what Yue said. :O

Had good quality, nice sync, interesting audio/video choice, nicely and subtly paced, and was interesting enough to watch a few times through, although it doesn't have the "hook" that other videos have had in the past. :O

Yay. Thumbs up
I know it doesn't have that same feel as other videos. I would have loved to make modifications to this, but I kinda lost my project when my OS went kaput a few weeks back and I didn't feel like re-piecing this thing together again.

But at least I got a thumbs up after making you wait for so long :twisted:
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Post by guy07 » Sat Jul 05, 2008 5:08 pm

Dammit, my one weakness .... really cheesy songs. pretty cool video. Intro still frame sucked though : /
Parts of the vid were too fast for the song, but i guess when you're working with an action/drama amv, that's bound to happen. Few strange scene choices but overall it was pretty solid.
3/5

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Post by Krisqo » Sat Jul 05, 2008 6:16 pm

guy07 wrote:Dammit, my one weakness .... really cheesy songs. pretty cool video. Intro still frame sucked though : /
Parts of the vid were too fast for the song, but i guess when you're working with an action/drama amv, that's bound to happen. Few strange scene choices but overall it was pretty solid.
3/5
Yeah... the intro does suck. Not much for bumpers either...

I'm not sure about parts being too fast as I tried to keep in pace with the music as best I could. Maybe the last few segments at the end could have been slower, but by that point, I was running our of usable material. Will work on pacing in next video.
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Post by jubjub2 » Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:58 am

Radical_Yue wrote: I felt the overall flow and pacing of the video could have been a bit better but I still enjoyed it none the less.
I agree... Maybe more focus on the mood of the song rather than the lyrics? You had some nice moments in there with the imagery though!

I'm a huge fan of Sting's music, so this will be in the special folder on my HD with the other nice vids I've found to his music.

Welcome back! :)

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