Clannad (movie) amv- His and Her Circumstances

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Clannad (movie) amv- His and Her Circumstances

Post by SheeGee » Sat Jun 28, 2008 1:51 pm

<b>Video:</b> <a href="http://www.animemusicvideos.org/video/160118">His and Her Circumstances</a>
<b>Category:</b> Character Profile, Drama, etc
<b>Anime:</b> Clannad (movie)
<b>Song:</b> Sometimes
<b>Artist:</b> This Day And Age
<b>Creator:</b> <a href="http://www.animemusicvideos.org/usernum ... uhist91</a>


its been awhile since i made an amv even if this is only a minute long.
pls rate and op it. thanks!!

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Post by krzT » Sat Jun 28, 2008 2:36 pm

/gets for td&a.
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Post by LeapofFate » Sat Jun 28, 2008 4:43 pm

I might check it out O:
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Post by Kionon » Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:17 pm

I only got this for the Nagisa-chan.

Technical Issues:

1. Letterboxing unncessary.
2. Interlacing.
3. Low quality compression.
4. Title overlay.

Content Issues:

1. Too much lip flap.
2. Too short.

In the end, this looked more like a beta to me, not a finished project. As betas go, I could definitely see some good stuff happening. The mood was good, and scenes (other than lip flap) seemed well chosen. I would have enjoyed it had there been more to enjoy. Rather it just cut off and left me hanging...
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Post by Otohiko » Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:54 pm

krzT wrote:/gets for td&a.
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Likewise :o

I liked the editing, on a basic level, and I think it had a fair sense of characters. On the minus side - well, the aforementioned technical problems are definitely a serious issue, and then the shortness really doesn't let its sense of characters develop very far, so as a result it doesn't come out as very effective drama unfortunately. I think to be an effective short it has to at least look a lot better visually, so I'd definitely work out that interlacing at least.
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Post by SheeGee » Sat Jun 28, 2008 10:35 pm

Otohiko wrote:
krzT wrote:/gets for td&a.
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Likewise :o

I liked the editing, on a basic level, and I think it had a fair sense of characters. On the minus side - well, the aforementioned technical problems are definitely a serious issue, and then the shortness really doesn't let its sense of characters develop very far, so as a result it doesn't come out as very effective drama unfortunately. I think to be an effective short it has to at least look a lot better visually, so I'd definitely work out that interlacing at least.
yea i tried uploading it in avi but for some reason it wouldnt let me...

also the song is only a minute long. i kinda had a bit of trouble picking out a song so i just used a song koop had used in one of his amvs.

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