Take Me, Break Me

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Sab3rZ3r0
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Take Me, Break Me

Post by Sab3rZ3r0 » Tue Jun 10, 2008 3:04 pm

Video: Take Me, Break Me
Category: Action, Other
Anime: Final Fantasy 7 (VII): Advent Children (OVA)
Song: Night Drive
Artist: The All-American Rejects
Creator: EvoKiller


My 1st AMV.

All feedback is welcome :D

P.S. Sorry if I didn't do the announcing post right, this is my first time announcing a video.
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Post by CorpseGoddess » Tue Jun 10, 2008 5:30 pm

Getting it now...

You might want to think about hosting it here on the .org so people don't have to go through the MegaUpload circus. :)

Edit: That was pretty good for a first amv! I'm not a big fan of the quick cuts myself...I like my eye to be able to settle on the scene I'm looking at for more than a split second. You did a good job with integrating it with the music, though.

Any particular reason you didn't finish the song?
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Post by Sab3rZ3r0 » Tue Jun 10, 2008 10:21 pm

CorpseGoddess wrote:Getting it now...

You might want to think about hosting it here on the .org so people don't have to go through the MegaUpload circus. :)

Edit: That was pretty good for a first amv! I'm not a big fan of the quick cuts myself...I like my eye to be able to settle on the scene I'm looking at for more than a split second. You did a good job with integrating it with the music, though.

Any particular reason you didn't finish the song?
laziness I guess xD, but thanks alot! :D glad to get some good feedback lol.
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Post by CorpseGoddess » Tue Jun 10, 2008 10:39 pm

You're welcome!

I would also keep an eye out for "lip flap"...Cloud at one point is talking---not sure if you were trying to match it to the words in the song at the time or not.

I don't know how long the whole song is, but you should definitely think about finishing it. At the very least, it's good practice. :P
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