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Post by CodeZTM » Sat May 24, 2008 1:05 am

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*thanks to Robbuz of Deviantart for allowing me to use her image in the banner*



I'm really pleased at how this one turned out. I love the Twilight series, and I can't wait for the movie to come out (although I'm not holding my breath at it being any good).

If you would like to see the original trailer, it can be found here

If you haven't read the books, I whole heartedly reccomend them.

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Post by Hagaren Viper » Sat May 24, 2008 1:14 am

Why, yes please! *gets*

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Post by Ghet » Sat May 24, 2008 1:16 am

poster is hawt, me gets to see if you fixed some of the stuff =/

My buddy Jacob Jamell, who helped me out with timing of the music. Thanks!

-Fa- who pointed out subtle mistakes in lip sync.

The Original Head Hunter who pointed out mistakes in lip sync and in scene selection.

surfsama, for helping me out with coloring effects & boosting my moral!

guy07 for telling me exactly what sucked. XD

SF_Phoeninx for coming late to the party, but still providing some sound advice in the process.
wut? did you totally forget someone? no wai =/


edit: t'was nice, better than the beta where you could see nothing
the part with the im not scared of you still kinda struck me as odd, but its a lot better than the one you used before.
overall this was a pretty good trailer, but i think you could have put in an extra few hours to really perfect it.
4/5 (and probably the most detailed crit ive given all year <3)

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Post by JaddziaDax » Sat May 24, 2008 1:29 am

uh i donno what the poster has to do with the video, and yea you shoulda found a car crash scene to stick in there O.o

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Post by Fay-Sa » Sat May 24, 2008 2:15 am

damn that was fast
/gets

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Post by Oli.C » Sat May 24, 2008 3:18 am

Hey dude thanks for sending me the beta of this - sorry I didn't get a chance to reply (was really swamped this week). It looked pretty interesting at that stage so I'm definitely checking this out!

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Post by CodeZTM » Sat May 24, 2008 11:12 am

JaddziaDax wrote:uh i donno what the poster has to do with the video, and yea you shoulda found a car crash scene to stick in there O.o
Lol.. The poster is Robbuz's depiction of Edward/Bella who Kyo/Tohru is depicting in the trailer. IT was just a picture I found gorgeous and wanted to use it. :O

And yah, it could have used a car scene, but Furuba was scarce with cars, and the anime I owned didn't have car scenes of similar artistic style.

Thanks for all the comments you guys! :)

(And Sorry Ghet for not putting you up there, you were my last beta tester, and I had already made the profile)

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Post by Kitsuner » Sat May 24, 2008 11:14 am

This title is very misleading. I didn't see any anime girls on top of live action footage.
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Post by The Origonal Head Hunter » Sat May 24, 2008 1:58 pm

my name is The Origonal Head Hunter, kthanxbai.

/gets

edit: Was cute, but the last scene and the 'I'm not scared of you' looked odd. Still, altogether nice. 4/5
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Post by Ingow » Sat May 24, 2008 3:58 pm

i mainly downloaded this because the poster looks like its two guys :uhoh:

nice short video, could've used a bit more color adjustment, IMO it was still way too bright for the mood even though you already dimmed it down.

try something longer and with more beats next O:

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