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Post by Cross/fade » Sun May 11, 2008 11:43 pm

Video: Personal Paradise
Categories: Character Profile Serious
Song: Interlude I & The Edge of Paradise
Artist: Kamelot
Anime: Shingetsutan Tsukihime

Well, gave my best for this one. I believe it turned out pretty good, but it's not like I'm gonna opinion myself here.
First time using mp4 .... love it o.O

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Post by Ingow » Mon May 12, 2008 4:57 am

that was some excellent story telling, I probably understood the Tsukihime plot better through this AMV than through the actual anime :lol:

the effects/methods of synching were way too cheesy at times though and the bad fansub quality made it 10x worse than it could've been as far as atmosphere goes

so next time you should try concentrating more on the overall image so that the video can't be destroyed by overused photoshop swirl filters and the like, but in general it was pretty entertaining, especially story-wise

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Post by Cross/fade » Mon May 12, 2008 12:19 pm

First of all, thank you for your comment. Well, good that you were entertained at least a little with it :wink:

I didnt touch photoshop but Im guessing your using it as a metaphor for "not so good effects go learn more" thing. Guess I will agree with you on that. Some of them might not be as good as I thought .... ><.

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Post by Kalium » Tue May 13, 2008 7:20 pm

Dear root, that was amazing!

This is actually substantially more coherent than the anime. Not hard, I know, but still. Anyway. I've played the game, so I have a good idea of what you're working from here.

I love this video. It's great. The quality is quite good, considering the quality of the DVDs in question. The audio is crisp and clear. The sync is solid and reliable, and there's even a clear plot and plot progression.

With the exception of a few spots, like 1:30, you've done a masterful job. I especially liked "demon's eyes".

You get a full 5 of 5 for this.

Oh, and we all <3 mirrormoon. :D

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Post by angelx03 » Tue May 13, 2008 8:35 pm

Ahhh, it's been awhile since I've seen a good Tsukihime video. Definitely keeping this one! 8-)
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Post by -MD » Tue May 13, 2008 9:44 pm

:up: Good stuff

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Post by OropherZero » Tue May 13, 2008 10:38 pm

I 4.5/5 endorse this, wish Type-Moon didn't stuff the anime up :/

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Post by NightHawk » Tue May 13, 2008 11:11 pm

I've never even heard of this anime...but it looks really interesting and I could tell what was going on, so that's great.

There was nothing wrong with this vid that I could see.

Kamelot is awesome, too.

5/5
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Post by Cross/fade » Wed May 14, 2008 12:23 am

Yeah, we <3 mirrormoon (for FSN too) and Kamelot. Wish there were more vids with their music. And yeah, Tsukihime anime was kind of .... worse than the game anyhow.

But, like always thank you for all the comments. They make me work harder, and help to create even better stuff. Wish I could include Akiha story in it, but that was impossible -__-. So I tried to create a story people would understand even without seeing the serie.
I still have my doubts about this amv here and there, but I do believe it is entertaining and people will enjoy it, and that's the most important part.

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Post by Oli.C » Wed May 14, 2008 12:30 am

/gets!

EDIT: Right... First of all, the song was awesome! - It totally had the right atmosphere and mood to fit the anime. I was enjoyed it most when you made use of internal sync, each time it worked out very nicely. Sad to say though, I soon got a little fed up with the effects overload, it was distracting to say the least. However on the whole the video was very well made and its clear you put a lot of effort into this one. Great Job!

4.25/5 :up:

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