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Elcalavero
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Post by Elcalavero » Fri May 02, 2008 7:08 pm


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Post by LeapofFate » Fri May 02, 2008 7:48 pm

i'll get.

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it was pretty good. i liked the lyric sync a lot.
though i didn't really liked the beginning of the video until the vocal came in and then i got in the mood to watch the whole thing.

try to make longer videos man :P

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Post by Elcalavero » Sat May 03, 2008 10:31 am

LeapofFate wrote:i'll get.

edit:

it was pretty good. i liked the lyric sync a lot.
though i didn't really liked the beginning of the video until the vocal came in and then i got in the mood to watch the whole thing.

try to make longer videos man :P

4/5
xD, yea I need to make my videos longer, I have uploaded only 3 amvs(My Goddess,Karas Project, and this one) on the org and all of them have the song shortened,one way or another. This is due to my lazyness xD.Anyways glad u liked it ^_^.

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Post by Flo' » Sat May 03, 2008 10:50 am

Cool, maybe you should try to improve a little more the quality, but it is Ok. :up:
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Post by Ryko89 » Sat May 03, 2008 12:56 pm

yeah. quality bugged me a tad, and some of that after effect fractal noise
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Post by Kristyrat » Sat May 03, 2008 4:33 pm

Obligatory download due to Ergo Proxy.

I gotta say, that was pretty fucking cool. I definitely didn't expect much from it, but you really pulled together some really clean, sweet looking edits. A lot of the rotoscoped compositions looked really damn cool, without being over the top, and (for the most part) the pace you maintained was drool-worthy. There were a couple points in the video where there'd be some faster drum hits that I felt you could have taken advantage of, but there was more good than bad, without a doubt.

I guessed you used Vegas from some of the Gradient Mapping effects you used (I'm such a gradient map whore :P), one suggestion would be to either reduce the opacity a little on those, or spread the black and white segments a little more, since you can see some of the artifacting that comes with that effect in some of your edits. Or, toss on a really (I stress, really) light gaussian blur, might smooth out some of that noise.

The fractal noise... I'll have to second Ryko on that, I think you could have made it work, but it seemed a little tacked on as it was.

As for the quality, yeah, I'd love to see this in a cleaner format, but it was far from being too detrimental to the video, because I enjoyed the editing so much.

In short, damn good job, I'm going to have to check out some of your other stuff. :up:

[Kristyrat]

(oh, and there's nothing wrong with short videos :O)
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Post by NS » Sat May 03, 2008 4:36 pm

damn man, you kinda just keep on improving don't you?

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Post by Elcalavero » Sat May 03, 2008 8:52 pm

Flowrite wrote:Cool, maybe you should try to improve a little more the quality, but it is Ok. :up:
Yes ill improve the quality on my next vid :P.
Ryko89 wrote:yeah. quality bugged me a tad, and some of that after effect fractal noise
I only used the the noise twice(or 3 times idk) :>.Anyways I hope u at least enjoyed it.
Kristyrat wrote: I gotta say, that was pretty fucking cool. I definitely didn't expect much from it, but you really pulled together some really clean, sweet looking edits.

In short, damn good job, I'm going to have to check out some of your other stuff. :up:

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Thanks for the free op and advice. 8-)
NerdStrudel wrote:damn man, you kinda just keep on improving don't you?


Yes, Of course!!! :P

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Post by JaddziaDax » Sun May 04, 2008 1:52 am

aside from a couple visual quality issues, I thought it was really neat... I didn't know what to expect but recently I've been slightly hooked on Ergo so I decided to download it :3

anyways this was good imho so keep up the good work :3

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Post by Falconone » Sun May 04, 2008 7:36 am

nice video... but i dont know why but for me it was not the greatest... but i think 4/5 are also ok :wink:
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