Hello everyone. First let me apologize if its horrible. I created this in 2 hours today before going to Costco to buy food haha. But yes, umm I'm new to the AMV world and I its enjoyable to create these. Feedback would be greatly appreciated. And again, sorry if it sucks, but please, in order for one to get better they must know what they are doing wrong and correct, right?
Thanks.
My 2nd AMV, feedback will be awesome. Thanks
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Dark_Lady_Kassendra
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Ok, we'll start with what's good. Nice song, even though I don't understand Japanese, it was fun. Video quality was good. But that's about all I got.
There was no point to the song... the song is titled 'Live everyday as if it were your last'. I didn't see any struggle of self all I saw was a couple of fight scenes. Ok, so the lady can fight. Good for her. But why? Why does she fight? Is it because she's living like that day might be her last? I didn't see that. You stated this took you two hours to make. It shows. My personal opinion is that if you're going to make an AMV that is trying to put forth a message like live everyday as if it were your last, then the story should be presented that way. Unfortunately your video falls under the catagory of my favorite anime and the awesome fight scenes set to your favorite song. There were alot of fun turns in the song that could have been in better sync with the video to help tell the story, to twist the plot. That's about all I got. Just try giving the AMV a little more of your time to put out a better quality of video.
Good luck in the future! I hope I might have helped
There was no point to the song... the song is titled 'Live everyday as if it were your last'. I didn't see any struggle of self all I saw was a couple of fight scenes. Ok, so the lady can fight. Good for her. But why? Why does she fight? Is it because she's living like that day might be her last? I didn't see that. You stated this took you two hours to make. It shows. My personal opinion is that if you're going to make an AMV that is trying to put forth a message like live everyday as if it were your last, then the story should be presented that way. Unfortunately your video falls under the catagory of my favorite anime and the awesome fight scenes set to your favorite song. There were alot of fun turns in the song that could have been in better sync with the video to help tell the story, to twist the plot. That's about all I got. Just try giving the AMV a little more of your time to put out a better quality of video.
Good luck in the future! I hope I might have helped
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JaddziaDax
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I like the song...
if you are gonna do an action video only, you should focus more on the movement in the video rather than just putting in random fight scenes and hoping they sync. The video flow was disrupted in several places, especially with some of the slower scenes... but it seems like a fun "relaxing" 2 hours for you.
if you are gonna do an action video only, you should focus more on the movement in the video rather than just putting in random fight scenes and hoping they sync. The video flow was disrupted in several places, especially with some of the slower scenes... but it seems like a fun "relaxing" 2 hours for you.
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Kalium
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You had me at "Fate/stay Night"... but I started wincing almost as soon as I opened the file. 720 by 272? What kind of fucked-up resolution is that?
Oh, wait, I know. Fansubs, plus some really aggressive cropping to get rid of the subs. Still, not a good sign.
There is this thing called sync. You plainly know what it is, since I can see you tried at a couple spots. It helps a lot if you do it continually.
Now, on flow. Also called narrative, coherency, and a lot of other things. Jaddzia's comment is right on. This feels like nothing more than a bunch of random fight scenes you threw on the timeline. There's no coherency, there's no flow, there's nothing here.
1/5. Technically massacred source and a lack of any form of sync.
Oh, wait, I know. Fansubs, plus some really aggressive cropping to get rid of the subs. Still, not a good sign.
There is this thing called sync. You plainly know what it is, since I can see you tried at a couple spots. It helps a lot if you do it continually.
Now, on flow. Also called narrative, coherency, and a lot of other things. Jaddzia's comment is right on. This feels like nothing more than a bunch of random fight scenes you threw on the timeline. There's no coherency, there's no flow, there's nothing here.
1/5. Technically massacred source and a lack of any form of sync.