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by JCD » Thu Feb 21, 2008 11:19 am
Yep, it was more meh than heh generally. I guess the main problem is that it needs high volume with maxed out bass and a big screen to make an impact, which is usually not a given at home computers. I could see me enjoying this at a con, but at home it really felt boring.
This is only a minor reason though. It overall needed much more internal sync or just much more powerful reactions to the song, and more importantly, better flow. Alot of the cuts felt akward because the scenes you sticked together didn't work together at all which disrupted said flow. Ridicolous black flashes also do their part to this. You also had nice parts in there which worked pretty well, but most of it was rather like described above.
All the spoken parts were pretty bad and didn't work out at all. Would've preffered to use the non-vocal version of the song.
This is one of my favourite songs of all time so it was hard for me to enjoy anyway since I have a clear vision how I would be doing things. That being ignored, I guess you did a good job, but it needs work, and furthermore practice.