AMV Review #45 - Malificus' Protecting Earth: Dawn's Order

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AMV Review #45 - Malificus' Protecting Earth: Dawn's Order

Post by GloryQuestor » Mon Jan 21, 2008 11:04 pm

Welcome to post #45 for the AMV Review channel. For those who are new to these posts, AMV Review is a gathering of editors who meet Monday evenings on the official IRC review channel (synIRC - #amv-review) to critique and leave opinons on a chosen video.

This weeks video was Malificus' Protecting Earth: Dawn's Order (or P.E.D.O. for short), which brought us to the obvious theme of the review this week, which is... well, read on to see what we had to say. :roll:

Please note that the views and opinions expressed below are those of the individuals participating in the conversation, and the following is not in any way the opinion of AnimeMusicVideos.Org or its staff members.
AMV-Review wrote:<G_Q> Okay, let's begin.
<Bashar> i'm going to try to grab this then go eat - i'll be back well into the discussion i guess =/
<G_Q> First, thanks to everyone for coming out for the review tonight.
<G_Q> The theme of tonight's review night will be quite obvious from the first video offered.
<G_Q> And here it is:
<G_Q> Video: Protecting Earth: Dawn's Order
<G_Q> Category: Drama, Action
<G_Q> Anime: Alien 9
<G_Q> Song: Good Morning Kids
<G_Q> Artist: Ellegarden
<G_Q> Creator: Malificus
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* G_Q changes topic to 'Review tonight with special guest host G_Q - download+op - http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=154148'
<Bashar> hah - the one album of theirs i don't have
<G_Q> Grab the vid and op it, discussion in :29
<MD_editing> ?
<godix> what the f*** is up with a bunch of kids popping crap out of their head?
<ngsilver> fun
<MD_editing> It just happens
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<Rathisponge> I have submitted my opinion G_Q
<Servo> I think I've seen this vid already.
<Servo> But I need to redownload it because I'm at a different station.
* MD_editing downloading
<Panky> ok does some1 know what is the anime about?
<Panky> it seems pretty strange
* MD_editing is now known as MD
<Rathisponge> I am not sure Panky.
<Panky> also i couldn't understand anything about the lyrics
<Rathisponge> I had trouble as well.
<MD> Mal is very complex :|
<godix> Just judging from the scenes I think the anime is one of those cutesy little girl superpower animes.
<Panky> a little girl superpower anime would use a song saying shit a few times ? O.o
<Panky> it seems as they could fly with the lil wings coming out of their heads right?
<Panky> also at 2:17 i think they missed a prepub hentai scene
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<G_Q> Okay, anyone else get anything that was going on in that video? O_o
<Orwell> the world is full of sh**
<Panky> i didn't get how everything was so happy then they were killing anyone and then be happy again
<G_Q> Neither did I
<G_Q> Actually, that ending just seemed thrown in there.
<Rathisponge> I looked up the lyrics and the video made more sense when I read over them
<Orwell> lyric link?
<Rathisponge> http://www.seeklyrics.com/lyrics/Ellega ... -Kids.html
<Panky> yeah it's hard to understand when english isn't your mother language
<Panky> and even more these songs
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<godix> I don't think the video worked. As far as I could tell this is probably one of those happy upbeat
animes and there just doesn't seem to be enough source to turn it into a drama vid
* Bashar|fooding is now known as Bashar
<Rathisponge> The video didn't seem to have any synchronization with the instrumental portion of the song
<Panky> i usually put big scores
<KioAtWork> I got it. I just didn't like it.
<Orwell> Does the girl die at 1:26?
<KioAtWork> Mostly my fault for not knowing the souce.
* ngsilver is watching & oping
<Orwell> This one isn't my fault!
<G_Q> I think that's the big issue with this vid, overall.
<Bashar> are my eyes messed up or is there a lot of rainbowing on edges in some places with this?
<Panky> i don't know but i really thought that at 2:17 someone was going to get raped
<G_Q> Has anyone seen the source before?
<KioAtWork> yeah the rainbowing and interlacing was horrid
<Rathisponge> I found that as well Bashar
<G_Q> Panky: Er... you did read the initials of the video title, right?
<Rathisponge> I haven't seen it G_Q
<KioAtWork> I liked the video in genral, but I wish we'd had less alien fighting scenes. It would have worked if I knew what was going on in those scenes.
<Panky> G_Q: why?
<G_Q> Protecting Earth: Dawn's Order = P.E.D.O. :P
<Panky> it's what i'm thinking of?
<Panky> well
<Panky> PEDO is another thing in my language
<G_Q> So, we do know what Malificus was going for on the surface.
<godix> Basher: Yes, there was rainbowing and the compression was rather poor. Now that has been said, the next person who talks about video quality gets flamed mercilessly
<Panky> nothing good really
<KioAtWork> moving on, and simply taking about how well he video conveys the concept...
<Bashar> as an aside - having listened to all of Ellegarden albums but this one... they record their music like that, so don't mark audio score down for that
<KioAtWork> I think it did rather well.
<Panky> godix: video quality doesn't seem god
<Panky> lol
<Panky> actually pedo in spanish is a fart
<Panky> he thought of all when he put initials
<G_Q> Following the music, I would agree on that point, but it's still a little too random.
<godix> Panky: Pedo in english means 'michael jackson'.
<G_Q> *Kio's point
<Panky> really?
<Panky> that makes a point
<KioAtWork> I really did feel the concept of "these are little girls, stuck in some weird version of war, and they're too

young to notice life is sh**, but they are."
<godix> I think he ran out of source to do what he wants. Most of it appears to be from one fight.
<KioAtWork> I think the fighting could havw been toned down.
<Panky> also when lyrics repeat it's hard to lyric synch
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<KioAtWork> The death and guts were fine, but there was more fightng than was necessary.
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<Panky> you never get tired of knowing the shit of life
<Panky> that's the whole point of it
<G_Q> It's like watching a video full of Mind Flayers.
<Panky> then when you're not in shit you feel happy and it's good
<G_Q> I mean, were there enough tentacles and angels' wings.
<G_Q> ...
<Panky> when a video starts flashing random scenes like 10 in 2 secs, it starts to be random
<G_Q> Wait ... "tentacles"... "angels wings"...
<Panky> and i'm saying this because i did it myself lots of times
<G_Q> I think I won't go there. -_-
<Panky> so there's a hentai subliminar message?
<ngsilver> hentai is everywhere
<G_Q> Since there were quite a few shots of unrevealed girls in birthday suits... I would guess so.
<Panky> but they don't have breasts
<G_Q> Konata did that also, actually.
<Panky> breasts are essential for every hentai
<G_Q> And she's an older teen
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<G_Q> Okay, let's guide this in another direction.
<G_Q> How about the technical aspects?
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<Panky> technical you mean frame ratio quality and that?
<G_Q> Yeah.
<Panky> hey PaperIsland
<Panky> quality is good but i bet it could be better
<Orwell> G_Q, it's like living at home, your a shotgun and some rounds short of slaughtering everyone in sight.
<Bashar> lots of hard, straight cuts when something softer might have worked
<Bashar> especially noticeable in the begining
<Rathisponge> that is an interesting observation Bashar
<Panky> also, how was it called that problem that appear when you see lines?
<G_Q> Interlacing
<Panky> yeah that was a problem too
<G_Q> Rainbowing, also.
<Panky> yeah kind of strange
<G_Q> Most of that is at the beginning.
<Panky> what aspect ratio does it have?
<Panky> 640x480?
<G_Q> 4:3
<Panky> so that was called aspect ratio
<Panky> i need to remember a few concepts
<godix> You guys are doing this to drive me crazy aren't you?
<ngsilver> I do remember something about this series inherantly having lots of rainbows in it
<Bashar> i'm just saying... if the aim was to contrast the "innocence" in the beginning and the harsh realities later on, having no variation in the way you cut/fade is a noticeable failing
<G_Q> Though it doesn't really full-screen that well.
<Panky> i'm actually surprised that there aren't any stray frames, I usually find some
<G_Q> At least, in VLC
<godix> Bashar: It's more than not changing the cuts, the scenese themselves don't really change much.
<G_Q> ngsilver: Blame Quadir. He picked it.
<G_Q> >_>
<godix> I mean right from the start he's loading up on as many crying scenes as he can find and that doesn't really change
<Orwell> Srsly. I tried to pick something watchable
<ngsilver> I can't gather my thoughts for this video enough to make an OP
<G_Q> Actually, that's more or less the op I gave :|
<Bashar> yea, there's a need to have almost 2 different styles that you go back and forth between to show a difference
<Orwell> I basically said that he has a clear concept, however the execution failed, not only in the cuts, but primarily from the scene selection
<Orwell> there is no contrast
<Bashar> and that wasn't attempted
<Orwell> and the song is entirely mundane, so when you have paranormal shit all over the place, it just doesn't really work
<Panky> at 1:50 - 2:10 the music seems happier but it stills show people being killed
<ngsilver> I don't feel much in any way really, just seemed that I couldn't get the idea of this video... that and I think PEDO threw me off
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<Panky> i'm the only one that feels that in such childish anime (for the drawing) is alright with showing bunches of organs threw to the floor?
<G_Q> Evening, Malificus
<Orwell> That's what a proper childhood is all about, none of this pretty shit we see today
<Mal> hey
<Orwell> how about a REAL fairy tale
<G_Q> btw, you've probably realized by now that the vid that's been chosen is yours.
<Mal> I noticed
<Mal> after the third op
<Orwell> I'll scan the backlogs, see if anything else comes up, in the mean time cooking awaits.
<Panky> Ok i didn't say the childs may never confront aliens battles or something like that in the future, but it's an anime
* Kit|bahhomework is now known as TidyKit
<godix> Mal: Is the anime one of those bright happy kiddie animes?
<Mal> yeah, like evangelion
<G_Q> ... er, that is so not like Eva O_o
<godix> perhaps we have different definitions of 'bright happy kiddie animes'....
<Mal> w/o the giant robots
<Panky> saikano had its magic, the drawing showed the harsh aspect of life even if they were in the 'childhood'
<Panky> it didn't feel the same way with this anime
<Panky> or I, at least
<Panky> can you tell me what somehow happens in the anime?
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<Panky> hey crack
<CrackTheSky> Hi
<G_Q> Evening, Crack
<Panky> it's been some long time since i talked to you
<MD> ToTheSky
<CrackTheSky> Indeed
<CrackTheSky> Hey all
<MD> o.o
<godix> evening cracker
<CrackTheSky> Am I late?
<Panky> not really
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<G_Q> CTS: You can still view the vid and leave an op if you like.
<godix> GQ: By the way, I did need the barf bag
<Servo> anyways back to the vid, I didn't like it, Just watched it
<G_Q> godix: Hold it for the bonus vid.
<CrackTheSky> I love this video
<CrackTheSky> The end
<G_Q> >_>
<G_Q> CTS: k. Short and too the point.
<MD> talking about Mals vid? I just saw it
<KioAtWork> Basically, I can't give a very detailed reaction because I watched the vide several hours ago.
<CrackTheSky> MD: Yeah
<Servo> the vid has too much girls crying, not enough content for my interests
<MD> I kind of want to watch the anime now
<godix> and too much 'what do they have to be sad for? That they WON the fight?'
<Servo> it feels like Mal used sequences that showed no point to the song combo, or emotion
<KioAtWork> I also want to see it. I want to know the context.
<ngsilver> I did notice that much, I thought the whole crying thing was overdone
<Panky> godix: that may leave some scars in their past but well, they won, you're right
<Panky> ohhhh naruto is on tv!
<Panky> back in 30'
<CrackTheSky> http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/encyclo ... php?id=784
<godix> I think he was trying for comedy by intentionally making a fun lighthearted anime into a dark emofest. I just don't think he succeeded.
<Servo> no Panky, don't go to the darkside
<G_Q> Mal: Were you going for a deep sadness theme with the video?
<Panky> it's late alraedy
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<Mal> deep sadness?
<godix> that description just screams 'pathetic anime'. Horror shows just don't start with "Otani Yuri, much to her disgust, has been elected by her class for alien fighting duty."
<Eclipse> am i late?
<CrackTheSky> lol godix
<G_Q> Eclipse: Still enough time to grab the vid and op.
<Mal> I dunno
<G_Q> Bonus is coming up, though.
<Eclipse> yay
<godix> apparently I was wrong on the lighthearted anime cast as dark for lulz idea though.
<godix> Which really makes me wonder, what was the point then?
<KioAtWork> Honestly, not mal's best. 7/10 at best, because too many of the scenes lacked real emotional context.
<Servo> godix: maybe the quality of the anime is what makes the horror
<godix> Servo: Given what I've seen of the anime, this video, I can believe that.
<G_Q> Okay, final summations, everyone.
<G_Q> Then on to bonus.
<Servo> I'll echo Kio. Mal is a good editor, but this vid didn't have any potential. I give it a 5/10.
<KioAtWork> Good concept, mediocre execution. Overdone cry scens. 7/10.
<Rathisponge> Interesting video , Good job :)
<godix> Not bad enough I'll be using it as an example of horrible videos for months on end. Instead it was just blah. I'll probably forget I ever saw this thing within a couple days.
<CrackTheSky> Too much crying, but still enjoyed the premise, and the execution was good as well
<CrackTheSky> 8/10
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<DSShadow> wtf?
<G_Q> I thought it had good technical merit after the rainbowed/interlaced scenes, but artistically, too much crying and I really had no idea what to make of it. The ending just didn't fit imho.
<Servo> To me personally, it was like "HEY! UHHHH....HOLD ON, WE FORGOT WHAT THIS VIDS ABOUT. LET'S JUST SHOW YOU RANDOM EMOTIONS INSTEAD."
* DSShadow is now known as `Eclipse
<Servo> Or maybe I'm just a bastard today.
<Servo> thumbs up Mal.
<Mal> O: whut
<Servo> nothing personal. But I hate the vid.
<Mal> oh yeah, I remembered concept.
<PaperIsland> All I cared about was the technical. Take that godix. Actually, I couldn't get it to play right on my friend's

computer.
<godix> PaperIsland: I hate you.
<godix> Of course I hate everyone
<G_Q> Okay, okay, bonus vid time.
<G_Q> Eclipse: Feel free to comment on the main vid when ready.
<Eclipse> yeah i think i already have
<Eclipse> it's not that bad. definitely not Mal's best, but it's not sh** either
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