XX: More Than Eye Candy - On hiatus

CrazyLee · Post by **CrazyLee** » Mon Sep 17, 2007 5:52 pm

Kira_Douji wrote:
LeeKitten wrote: Not a lot of time left, But I was thinking that one last lady would be awesome to include. By day she's a normal high school girl. By night she's one of the leaders of a rebellion that's fighting an evil empire! Her name is Karen Stadtfeld! And she kicks ass!

...and I remember thinking of using "Love is a Battlefield" by Pat Benetar for a certain anime woman, and I can't remember who that was. Not the girl above as I don't see her as being in any major relationships. Hmm.

Perhaps not that song, but "Invincible" (by Pat Benetar as well) would be good for Karen! Too bad you don't have the time to put that together, I bet it'd be a good segment.

- Kira
(Now wishing I had Code Geass Raws T_T )

I don't have raws either.

CorpseGoddess · Post by **CorpseGoddess** » Tue Sep 18, 2007 2:24 pm

Okay, here it is:

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=EKOH4JB8

If there's no changes you need, you can consider that the final.

kiarrens · Post by **kiarrens** » Tue Sep 18, 2007 3:03 pm

CorpseGoddess wrote:Okay, here it is:

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=EKOH4JB8

If there's no changes you need, you can consider that the final.

I can't download it without a premium account... I assume that's the uncompressed, ne? Did you upload an XviD or something for beta viewing purposes as well?

CorpseGoddess · Post by **CorpseGoddess** » Tue Sep 18, 2007 3:58 pm

kiarrens wrote:
CorpseGoddess wrote:Okay, here it is:

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=EKOH4JB8

If there's no changes you need, you can consider that the final.
I can't download it without a premium account... I assume that's the uncompressed, ne? Did you upload an XviD or something for beta viewing purposes as well?

Hmmm. That's weird. I uploaded the same as I did the last one. And yeah, that's uncompressed. I'll upload the xvid version when I get home. I was a bit sleepy this morning.

CorpseGoddess · Post by **CorpseGoddess** » Tue Sep 18, 2007 8:27 pm

Okay, brain death temporarily suspended long enough to upload a watchable version:

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=A1SG5AMJ

CodeZTM · Post by **CodeZTM** » Tue Sep 18, 2007 8:44 pm

Gimmeh another day. Internet has been down where my high speed internet is at for the last week. It finally was repaired, but after I had left work. X_X

kiarrens · Post by **kiarrens** » Tue Sep 18, 2007 10:30 pm

Beginning DL and heading to bed, I'll check it out tomorrow when I get home from work.

*edit* Aaand I'm home. I REALLY like the changes, particularly the section starting at 1:05 and the very end.

I'm working on getting an FTP set up, so as soon as I have the info I'll let you know.

Topstar_Productions · Post by **Topstar_Productions** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 1:53 am

I'm so sorry... I haven't given you a second Beta... I've been unable to do any editing work between school and work. Hopefully I can get something decent turned out in a little bit here if you havn't already booted me.

CorpseGoddess · Post by **CorpseGoddess** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 2:14 am

kiarrens wrote:Beginning DL and heading to bed, I'll check it out tomorrow when I get home from work.

*edit* Aaand I'm home. I REALLY like the changes, particularly the section starting at 1:05 and the very end. I'm working on getting an FTP set up, so as soon as I have the info I'll let you know.

Yay! Thanks for the editing direction. I'll polish it up a smidge more and then upload the final when you're ready.

kiarrens · Post by **kiarrens** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 11:05 am

Topstar_Productions wrote:I'm so sorry... I haven't given you a second Beta... I've been unable to do any editing work between school and work. Hopefully I can get something decent turned out in a little bit here if you havn't already booted me.

Nope, you're not dropped. The only advice I have regarding your segment is #1. more buildup to the main event (ie the jumping), like her training, and maybe a glimpse of her reasons for wanting to "be the best," and #2. making your subtitles smaller and a uniform color, as well as adding a stroke (an outline) to them, if you can.