2/5
Why?
-The intro... There should be much more for such a powerful atmosphere of the song. It was too lame
-It was too simpel. Just the same thing over and over again. No atmosphere, no mood was created, not entertaining
-The "story" is a simpel randomn shot on Grave. I would like to see more of Brandon!
Do you know the lyrics of the song?
Ok my version at home is more brutal from the lyrics sight and is a werewolf story, but this lyric version doesn´t really match with your video. It matches better with the crazy superiors. To focus the video on them would be better in my eyes.
Try better next time. It was a nice try but didn´t statisfied me at all. I´m sure you can make better. Focus more on the atmosphere you want to create, timing (edit more with the song together). Things like simpel crossfade would maybe make wonders when you want to create a mood.
Overall... I think that the effects were simpel and ok. I don´t have the feeling that there should be more or that they´re wrong. It´s just better editing and atmosphere is what I miss.
I think you just need more experience to know what´s good and what not. Watching good amv of this site can give you a good imagination.
Gungrave
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Thanks for the rating and sorry for the late reply.
It is true that I didnt even focus on creating a mood I just wanted to make actually some random clips of grave
Thing is that I was moved by the song and by the song I picked each clip. Is that correct? Should I know something to improve the way I create an amv?
I use adobe premiere pro 2.0 but I have lying here adobe after effects 7.0 which I havent used at all. Should I? Any other programs that you would suggest?
It is true that I didnt even focus on creating a mood I just wanted to make actually some random clips of grave
Thing is that I was moved by the song and by the song I picked each clip. Is that correct? Should I know something to improve the way I create an amv?I use adobe premiere pro 2.0 but I have lying here adobe after effects 7.0 which I havent used at all. Should I? Any other programs that you would suggest?