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1:1 Opinion for my video Enter the New World(not one piece)

Post by 8bitcritr » Tue Feb 17, 2015 4:47 pm


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This is definitely one of my better videos. I think its give Shinsekai Yori the type of hype it deserves seeing as how unpopular it is for some reason :cry: :cry: :cry:

gimme an opinion for the betterment of the AMV community and I'll do the same :up: . Oover and oout
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Re: 1:1 Opinion for my video Enter the New World(not one pie

Post by knage » Thu Mar 19, 2015 1:04 am

Left you an opinion, please see my AMV

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Re: 1:1 Opinion for my video Enter the New World(not one pie

Post by Tigrin » Sun Mar 22, 2015 2:40 pm

Left an opinion for you. :) I hadn't heard of this anime but it looks pretty cool!

If you could, I'd love to get some feedback on my WIP video: https://www.dropbox.com/s/91kho72a64ur2 ... 6.mp4?dl=0
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Re: 1:1 Opinion for my video Enter the New World(not one pie

Post by 8bitcritr » Wed Mar 25, 2015 7:43 pm

So sorry that this review is this late tigrin. Here ya go

The concept here is really good and kinda funny especially in the beginning. The song choice was pretty well thought out. There were quite a few little timings that were off but I'm guessing that since this is still a WIP you're still working on that. The timing at 1:40 was the most noticeably off. I can appreciate the hardcut and crossdisolve only style of editing and you do a good job with it. It wouldn't hurt to stuff in a few more clips however. The song seems moderately upbeat, and the video is moderately slow at some points. A nice filter or some color adjustments wouldn't hurt either, but that's really all a personal choice. Overall I like it but it could have been a little more upbeat and the timing needs tuning that's my only concern. If you get those two things down then I bet this could win at a con. :up: I mean who doesn't love Death Note
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Re: 1:1 Opinion for my video Enter the New World(not one pie

Post by Tigrin » Thu Mar 26, 2015 2:31 am

Thanks for the feedback! I've since done a timing pass on the video, but I'm continuing to look at it. I'm not entirely sure what to do about the pacing... I don't want to say "it's too much work to fix", but it's keeping a fairly regular rhythm right now, and it would be tough to bump it up without increasing the amount of clips overall... but I'll look at some parts that I know are slower and see if there's anything I could do. Thanks again! :)
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Re: 1:1 Opinion for my video Enter the New World(not one pie

Post by Gene Starwind 21122 » Sun Apr 12, 2015 10:09 am

I'm downloading your video now. Could you please review my latest AMV?

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Re: 1:1 Opinion for my video Enter the New World(not one pie

Post by Gene Starwind 21122 » Sun Apr 12, 2015 10:31 am

Review is up.
No matter what, stay calm, stay cool and live life to the fullest.
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Re: 1:1 Opinion for my video Enter the New World(not one pie

Post by SilverSoulAMV » Tue Apr 21, 2015 12:03 pm

Video: The Journey of Studio Ghibli - AMV ♫
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=198232
Category: Fun, Romance, Other
Anime: Studio Ghibli Movies
Song: Silver Birch
Artist: the HIATUS
Creator: SilverSoul

Downloading yours atm. An opinion would be nice :)
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