WIP-Killing Loneliness-X

[Nekoyoukai]

Ok I've been working on this video for the past 5 months off and on and I've finnaly got somethig that resembles a finished product. But before i upload it onto this site I figured I'd let all of you guys rip it apart first so that I might be able to make it better.
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=D34NQS7U
Anime: X (TV), X (Movie)
Song: Killing Loneliness by: HIM
I basically would like to know how well the whole video flows. About half way throught and at the end I've added some audio from the show and would like peoples opinions on how well that works (or doesn't work) as well.
Thank you in advance