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One Honest Op For Anotha'

Post by RajinAsian » Sat Apr 22, 2006 7:36 pm

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=114768

Please, if you watch it and decide to trade opinions with me, I ask that you give me good advice more than anything. I know it's not great, but I see it as a good stepping stone to what I have practiced.

The beginning starts slow in an attempt as not to waste fight scenes nor repeating scenes and I as well wished to introduce the main fighter characters. The end picks up and I think svaes it from being a piece of crap.

So with that in mind tell me what I should change about my style, transitions, and cutting. Flame it if you wish, I learn from anything as long as it aint, 'c00l stu4f'.

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Post by sasuke2468 » Sat Apr 22, 2006 7:44 pm

^_^ kk i'll op urs its dl'n now, mines in my sig

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Post by RajinAsian » Sat Apr 22, 2006 7:59 pm

DLing yours now.

How is Vegas, the program. What kind of 'extra' stuff does it do? In difference to others.

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Post by RajinAsian » Sat Apr 22, 2006 8:13 pm

Left it for you.

For an expanded response. It was amazing and rather motivatign as it is alot of times seeing the many editors here who are far more experienced than myself.
The only thing I had a problem with was the end, I was so into the fight sequences and music I was hoping it would end with the final Omnislash, but a good ending none the less.

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Post by sasuke2468 » Sat Apr 22, 2006 8:19 pm

:?: were you the quick comment? cuz it doesn't say any new opinions lol

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Post by RajinAsian » Sat Apr 22, 2006 8:20 pm

sasuke2468 wrote::?: were you the quick comment? cuz it doesn't say any new opinions lol

Oh haha, I am a dolt. Sorry. One second. Sorry, I am very new here and I navigate the site through trial and error.

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Post by sasuke2468 » Sat Apr 22, 2006 8:23 pm

^_^ its ok np

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Post by RajinAsian » Sat Apr 22, 2006 8:26 pm

Thank you so much for the opinion, it has helped me and I am laying down some frame work for my next project and I hope to spend more time on it than the last one.

I left your opinion.

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Post by Devil^Shin » Sun Apr 23, 2006 5:21 pm

yo i'll do op exchange with you :P here's mine amv :
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=112351
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To become the dew that quenches the land, To spare the sands, the seas, the skies, I offer thee this silent sacrifice.

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