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- guy07
- Joined: Mon Sep 08, 2003 1:28 pm
- Status: Back in beard.
- Location: T.O.
- Niwa
- Cake Addiction
- Joined: Fri Jul 02, 2004 6:41 pm
- Location: Sweden
- Contact:
- omegaevolution
- Joined: Wed Nov 23, 2005 6:46 pm
- Location: ZOMG, THE OMEGA MOVIL!! =O
oh you cheater :/, you had it in binary code when I wrote that >.>servo101010 wrote:??? Don't ask me.omegaevolution wrote: a computer geek that loves Crack?, I mean seriously who writes his profile info in binary code?
oh well who cares, is not like I'm going to waste my time figuring out what it says there

@Guy: oh come on, join the fun of the bunny!! O: (I will check your beta tomorrow)
@Niwa: :3
- guy07
- Joined: Mon Sep 08, 2003 1:28 pm
- Status: Back in beard.
- Location: T.O.
- CrackTheSky
- has trust issues
- Joined: Sun Aug 27, 2006 11:01 pm
- Status: Maybe editing?
- Location: Chicago
- WC Annihilus
- Joined: Wed Jan 17, 2007 10:49 pm
Well first thing that comes to mind is I think the cracking of the glass thing at :15 should occur on that big beat rather than the cut. I'm a much bigger fan of internal sync rather than cut sync. I'm too tired to think of anything else right now >.> (aside from the crappy lip sync and the adult bunnies =O)
- Scott Green
- Greenwhore
- Joined: Thu Mar 23, 2006 1:25 pm
- Status: The Dark Tower
- Location: Austria
Waaa....what the......helll.....happend to my name...Niwa-kun wrote:![]()
I was just pushed back many places....
But oh well, we are all not worth mentioning except the bunny....
hmmm...hey why is crack a rabbit????
Isn´t crack that thing your getting high from???
like that
should I?

then you took it

then it hurts terribly

then you feel good

and after that you feel like niwa-kuns avatar.....
- Niwa
- Cake Addiction
- Joined: Fri Jul 02, 2004 6:41 pm
- Location: Sweden
- Contact:
- Greggus1
- Joined: Wed Dec 14, 2005 12:07 pm
I'll refer you to my comment on your last beta :
"-Quality of the lip-sync aside, the clip you chose to lip-sync to really isn't great. This is a major moment in the entire video, and you need a clip that's alot more atmospheric."
GET SOME FUCKING CLOSE-UP LIP-SYNCS IN THERE.
Besides the vocal part of the track, it was decent, but you overloaded some parts with pointless, pointless, ugly effects. The fractal noise seemed completely inappropriate, and the bar overlays were just plain gross. Also, I agree with WC on internal-synching the button-punching part. That's a must as well.
This still has alot of potential, but the more ambitious you get, the more there is to fix. You can do it
EDIT : Also, the planet zooming out doesn't work well.
"-Quality of the lip-sync aside, the clip you chose to lip-sync to really isn't great. This is a major moment in the entire video, and you need a clip that's alot more atmospheric."
GET SOME FUCKING CLOSE-UP LIP-SYNCS IN THERE.
Besides the vocal part of the track, it was decent, but you overloaded some parts with pointless, pointless, ugly effects. The fractal noise seemed completely inappropriate, and the bar overlays were just plain gross. Also, I agree with WC on internal-synching the button-punching part. That's a must as well.
This still has alot of potential, but the more ambitious you get, the more there is to fix. You can do it

EDIT : Also, the planet zooming out doesn't work well.
