I like it, the timing from :23-:27 is a bit hard to pick up on though.
@guy

@chrono
I'll second sky on the text at the end...not a big fan of that.
I think your track needs more motion, it just feels a bit too static to me (the kissing scene is good, but maybe it would benefit from some shaking like what you did for negi's face just afterwards)
@chii
liked your first beta, second one looks good too (though Linux still doesn't play the audio for it...I think it's safe to assume that the timing is still on)
I like the bubbles for the transition. I think the transition from guy's part will turn out good, just make sure that you both have it going at the same speed
@bauzi
now that I've seen it a few times, I think your betas since beta-03 are a bit bright (maybe expand that black oval in the center maybe?)
Piano keys at the very end of your segment seem to be off (or I can't pick up on what they're timed to)
other than that...put the two parts together so we can see the whole thing
@all
tacos > waffles
pizza >> all