A short and full AMV

[freakinerd]

Hope you all like it.

Video: Short (Preview)
Category: Action
Anime: Naruto, Naruto Shippuuden
Song: Falling Apart
Artist: Zebrahead
Creator: Freakinerd
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For this one, I actually started from the end and worked my way down, when I had the first 30 secs. left, I ran out of ideas and just put what I can to if the scene.

Video: The Final Fight I Win (Preview)
Category: Action, Drama
Anime: Naruto, Naruto Shippuuden
Song: Until the End
Artist: Breaking Benjamin
Creator: Freakinerd

[Sora no Honou 空の炎]

It was pretty good. I didn't really like how the masking seemed heavily feathered, and seeing credits text from intros was annoying, but it wasn't really bad. Good editing, good song choice, overall not that bad. Good job.

[Taite]

My advice, first off, is that you need to find the raw openings and endings. Subs are not pleasing to the eye.
Second off, it's best, in my opinion, that you use as little of the ops/eds as possible. This is because the scenes are very repetitive and not original. They are perhaps the most raped scenes in all naruto amvs.
Thirdly, the masks were a little messy, though I'm sure you already know. Work on not feathering so excessively.
Fourth, because of the huge amount of naruto amvs/betas, it's important to have originality in your video. But because this was a short video, originality wasn't so necessary. I'm guessing you made this on a whim? Just a future tip though, if you want to make your video stand out, originality is great.

I'm definitely not going to lecture you for using Naruto or Zebrahead though. But again, if you're going to make a full amv in the future, and you want some srs crit, I'd advise not just throwing something together on a whim.

BUT, if you're looking to just have some fun and mess around a'lil on your program, by all means, do it. Don't worry about anime and song choice. However, when you showcase your video like this, you'll most likely get some crit (good or bad.) Youtube seems a more appropriate site to share videos like this (short betas n all), however, we do have a chatroom and stuff if you're looking for advice n such. But when you post in the AMV Announcements, people don't generally expect a... for a lack of a better word, 'random' video.


Just my opinion.

[Begi]

masks were really messy. some were overfeathered and some needed some feather. get rid of the subs. try getting raws or buyin the series if its available. quality was terrible. try lookin at some of the guides on A/V quality help.
the video was also way too short to give a fully developed opinion, but hopefully u can fix those errors by the time u post the finished version (if u decide to finish it)

[freakinerd]

My advice, first off, is that you need to find the raw openings and endings. Subs are not pleasing to the eye.
Second off, it's best, in my opinion, that you use as little of the ops/eds as possible. This is because the scenes are very repetitive and not original. They are perhaps the most raped scenes in all naruto amvs.
Thirdly, the masks were a little messy, though I'm sure you already know. Work on not feathering so excessively.
Fourth, because of the huge amount of naruto amvs/betas, it's important to have originality in your video. But because this was a short video, originality wasn't so necessary. I'm guessing you made this on a whim? Just a future tip though, if you want to make your video stand out, originality is great.

I'm definitely not going to lecture you for using Naruto or Zebrahead though. But again, if you're going to make a full amv in the future, and you want some srs crit, I'd advise not just throwing something together on a whim.

BUT, if you're looking to just have some fun and mess around a'lil on your program, by all means, do it. Don't worry about anime and song choice. However, when you showcase your video like this, you'll most likely get some crit (good or bad.) Youtube seems a more appropriate site to share videos like this (short betas n all), however, we do have a chatroom and stuff if you're looking for advice n such. But when you post in the AMV Announcements, people don't generally expect a... for a lack of a better word, 'random' video.


Just my opinion.

First: I wanted to use Op/Ed without subs and credits, but I couldn't find any, that and lack of funds.
Second: This is actually my first time using craploads of Op/Ed, I only used it to fit the each scenes of the characters.
Third: Yeah, I know.
Fourth: Not on a whim, I kind of thought this one out.

I actually wanted to make a full AMV out of this, but decided to make it a short instead.

Opinions are always welcome, thank you.

[Noss]

Video: Short (Preview)
Category: Action
Anime: Naruto, Naruto Shippuuden
Song: Falling Apart
Artist: Zebrahead
Creator: Freakinerd

good good
i like the musictrack and your beatsync is pretty good...
i cant wait to see the full version