RomeoXJuliet Shattered

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guardiansoulblade
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RomeoXJuliet Shattered

Post by guardiansoulblade » Sun Jan 10, 2010 9:50 pm


The local upload just went up, so feel free to watch when it's finished.Youtube links to watch if you want:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XDVPKvRz-Fw
Last edited by guardiansoulblade on Sun Jan 10, 2010 11:04 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: RomeoXJuliet Shattered

Post by CodeZTM » Sun Jan 10, 2010 10:15 pm

Constructive Remarks

1) Video quality
2) Lip Flap
3) Cutouts at the beginning kind of had random scenes and constrasted pretty harshly against the dark background & the outline was really blurry
4) Some sort of beat sync would have helped the video out.
5) Scenes went on a little long at times.
6) Action scenes towards the end moved a little fast for the video

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Positive Remarks

1) Hit the mood pretty well.
2) Emotional sync and scene selection [for about 85% of the video] was well done and fit the audio nicely.


Overally, pretty nice, but needed a little more focus here and there. :up:

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Re: RomeoXJuliet Shattered

Post by guardiansoulblade » Sun Jan 10, 2010 10:30 pm

1) Video quality
2) Lip Flap
3) Cutouts at the beginning kind of had random scenes and constrasted pretty harshly against the dark background & the outline was really blurry
4) Some sort of beat sync would have helped the video out.
5) Scenes went on a little long at times.
6) Action scenes towards the end moved a little fast for the video

Repsonses:
1. Sorry about that, I rendered it to mp4 using Zarx and my source footage was Huffyuv.
2. I wasn't purposely trying to lipsync or I would have put that as part of the video.
3. About the outline of those small clips, it was supposed to look like that, I used some masking in my editing program.
4. I suck at beat sync but I keep on trying, unfortunately, it never turns out the way I'd like it.
5. Sorry about the long scenes, but I liked them, I'll keep that in mind though when I make another one.
5. Yeah, I noticed the sync was kind of off but I don't know if I could fix it and re-upload it.

I'm just happy though thought I did a pretty good job on it.

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