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Eternal Torture

Post by BaQuM » Tue Sep 01, 2009 5:41 pm

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Didn't want to upload this shit but Phlu made me. :roll:
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Re: Cheesy Title

Post by Phlu » Tue Sep 01, 2009 5:41 pm

Yay!

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Re: Cheesy Title

Post by Sephirothishere » Tue Sep 01, 2009 6:31 pm

BERSERK!

- gets -

update:

Where is the bacon?

Well it was nice, nothing out of ordinary. Creepy in a way :P

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Re: Cheesy Title

Post by BaQuM » Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:09 pm

Sephirothishere wrote:BERSERK!

- gets -

update:

Where is the bacon?

Well it was nice, nothing out of ordinary. Creepy in a way :P
Phlu stole it.

Thanks, and making it creepy was my goal! :D

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Re: Eternal Torture

Post by Inan » Tue Sep 01, 2009 9:35 pm

when you first showed me this beta i wasnt sure if this was anime or one of those old night of the living dead films

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Re: Eternal Torture

Post by Kevmaster » Tue Sep 01, 2009 11:52 pm

You said you'd make it longer...


This is a wonderful video anyway.


btw. That title you picked is horrid -_-
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Re: Eternal Torture

Post by AaronAMV » Tue Sep 01, 2009 11:53 pm

im gonna get this 8-)
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Re: Eternal Torture

Post by BaQuM » Wed Sep 02, 2009 4:12 am

Kevmaster wrote:You said you'd make it longer...


This is a wonderful video anyway.


btw. That title you picked is horrid -_-
Yeah I know, the rest of the song was some coo' Black Metal, but I completely ran out of ideas and inspiration... :(

Thanks and I know the title is horrible, was kind of a working title but since I had already made credits for it I decided just to go with it. lol

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Re: Eternal Torture

Post by Ingow » Wed Sep 02, 2009 7:43 am

I can see what you were going for here, but I didn't like it.

-The levels and brightness/contrast stuff wasn't very well composed. It looks like you were just randomly slapping effect over effect without trying to get the right look for each scenario.
-The scene selection and anime choice in general was distracting, most of these scenes are popular as fuck, so you'd always be reminded "hey this isn't some strange Black Metal tape, it's Berserk with Old Film on top".
-If you had edited the entire song with the black metal in it at about halfway through the scene thing and Berserk stuff wouldn't have been a problem anymore, since it would've been a straight AMV instead of just an open experiment. And 6mins in that style would've definately been more interesting than this.
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Re: Eternal Torture

Post by BaQuM » Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:07 am

Ingow wrote:I can see what you were going for here, but I didn't like it.

-The levels and brightness/contrast stuff wasn't very well composed. It looks like you were just randomly slapping effect over effect without trying to get the right look for each scenario.
-The scene selection and anime choice in general was distracting, most of these scenes are popular as fuck, so you'd always be reminded "hey this isn't some strange Black Metal tape, it's Berserk with Old Film on top".
-If you had edited the entire song with the black metal in it at about halfway through the scene thing and Berserk stuff wouldn't have been a problem anymore, since it would've been a straight AMV instead of just an open experiment. And 6mins in that style would've definately been more interesting than this.
Thank you for the constructive criticism, I really appreciate it!
And that's exactly why I didn't feel like uploading it, it's just simply too unpolished, rushed and feels unfinished. Though even if it may seem to you like I didn't try adjusting the effects for different scenes I really did.. for the first 30 seconds. And I'll keep in mind what you said when choosing anime and scenes next time! But yeah now that I have a better idea of what I want to achieve I can hopefully release a project with similar ideas only with a far better execution. :D

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