
Who can tell me what Avis means?
woo thanks. and yeah it looked kind of awkward so I decided not to go with it, but it was mainly due to pure lazyness.. i think.. Oh and yes the girl is completely envious because she wants to go to war too D;! (notrly) xPZetZu wrote: (btw, avis is slang for envious in swedish O:)
Naw, wasn't able to make a different ending after all?
All in all it was goodie~ Some crossfades looked a bit iffy, but might just be me.
I think you really told this story excellently, even though it was rather simple.
Simple does not mean bad in anyway, though.
All in all I like it, just have some small nitpicks~
good job gurl O:
Bingo. I'd give you a cookie, but I'm too selfish to share oreos. D; I'm surprised no one mentioned the airline yet.Dasda wrote:bird?