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Naritakisou Forever

Post by Minimoto » Fri Jul 10, 2009 8:51 pm

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Well... this is a Mahoraba ~Hearful Days~ AMV. I used this source because it doesn't have many videos on it that I can see and it fit the song I wanted to use. The song is Will You Know by Echo Image and I felt like using this song because the AMV Never Fall Apart really inspired me. Well... I know that it's not the best thing on the block but I hope you enjoy it? MAJOR problem in this AMV is the mass amount of lip flap... I know... I'm bad at getting rid of it :sweat:
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*This time it's not WMV! It's .mp4*

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Re: Naritakisou Forever

Post by Tearx » Fri Jul 10, 2009 9:17 pm

That was cute, just it seemed like you tried to sync every single little beat a bit too much which made it look meh. Also wished you changed the pacing more once the chorus kicked in. 3/5
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Re: Naritakisou Forever

Post by Nya-chan Production » Fri Jul 10, 2009 10:38 pm

MAHORABA AMV!!!!!!!!!

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Re: Naritakisou Forever

Post by Minimoto » Fri Jul 10, 2009 11:28 pm

Tearx wrote:That was cute, just it seemed like you tried to sync every single little beat a bit too much which made it look meh. Also wished you changed the pacing more once the chorus kicked in. 3/5
Yeah, I have a habit of doing that... need to fix it.
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Re: Naritakisou Forever

Post by Nya-chan Production » Sat Jul 11, 2009 10:32 am

Was pleased:

MAHORABA
Fixed aspect ratio, good work
The feeling/mood

Wasn't pleased:
Not very clear, there were strong leftovers of interlacing. Better cleaning, maybe?
The pacing wasn't the best... but maybe it has something to do with the fact that I can't get over associating this song with Honey/Clover vid...
Abrupt end
Lipflap. Hint - if the head is still, fixing a lipflap is VERY easy. Just use a simple mask of a closed mouth in a stopped frame over it. Work for a minute ;x

In the all, it was a nice vid, technically alittle weak, but with nice spirit and all.

4/5 and approving. Na-chan would be pleased!
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Re: Naritakisou Forever

Post by Minimoto » Sat Jul 11, 2009 11:12 am

Nya-chan Production wrote:Was pleased:

MAHORABA
Fixed aspect ratio, good work
The feeling/mood

Wasn't pleased:
Not very clear, there were strong leftovers of interlacing. Better cleaning, maybe?
The pacing wasn't the best... but maybe it has something to do with the fact that I can't get over associating this song with Honey/Clover vid...
Abrupt end
Lipflap. Hint - if the head is still, fixing a lipflap is VERY easy. Just use a simple mask of a closed mouth in a stopped frame over it. Work for a minute ;x

In the all, it was a nice vid, technically alittle weak, but with nice spirit and all.

4/5 and approving. Na-chan would be pleased!
Yeah, one of the problems when I made this vid was the low self asteem that came with looking at the H&C one. Thanks for the hint, I'll try it next time.
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Re: Naritakisou Forever

Post by Aggressor » Sat Jul 11, 2009 11:38 am

Nya-chan Production wrote:Wasn't pleased:
Not very clear, there were strong leftovers of interlacing. Better cleaning, maybe?
The pacing wasn't the best... but maybe it has something to do with the fact that I can't get over associating this song with Honey/Clover vid...
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Lipflap.
+ audio bug on 3:19 (maybe cut in the song?)
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Re: Naritakisou Forever

Post by Nya-chan Production » Sat Jul 11, 2009 11:59 am

Aggressor wrote:+ audio bug on 3:19 (maybe cut in the song?)
Oh, forgot that one.

Went over it two times to make sure it wasn't my PC skipping or something :> Too hearable~
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Re: Naritakisou Forever

Post by Minimoto » Sat Jul 11, 2009 12:06 pm

Nya-chan Production wrote:
Aggressor wrote:+ audio bug on 3:19 (maybe cut in the song?)
Oh, forgot that one.

Went over it two times to make sure it wasn't my PC skipping or something :> Too hearable~
Really?!
/runs to check
I just noticed... wow...
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