The challenge- My first AMV

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rolando90
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The challenge- My first AMV

Post by rolando90 » Sun Dec 21, 2008 2:23 am

The challenge

Rise Against -Under the knife
Bleach
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Indirect link: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=ZK0YZP7B
Hi, I'm new in the forum, so I'm still getting used to it. I don't quite understand all of this but I hope I will get it soon xD. Well, It's a Bleach AMV centered on Ichigo. It's my first work, so don't be too hard :(. I'll be paying attention to any suggestions you have for my upcoming works. Thanks in advance. See ya.

PD: Couldn't find the way to upload it to a ftp server (though i read the guide and found a ftp program.. so I uploaded it to MU, hope it works). And if my English kinda sucks... I'm not english speaker btw
Last edited by rolando90 on Sun Dec 21, 2008 2:48 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: The challenge- My first AMV

Post by JaddziaDax » Sun Dec 21, 2008 2:33 am

take the spaces out of the vidid tag :3 and it should work

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Re: The challenge- My first AMV

Post by Sephirothishere » Sun Dec 21, 2008 10:50 am

Well it was overall pretty decent for a first!
I liked how u maintained the right pace from the start to end and the song choice was nice for a first-try-random-action-video.
The worst thing i could see was the change of the Aspect Ratio in the middle of the vid. U should use pan/crop to fix some AR differences on the footage. The rest is pretty forgivable, since u're a novice here :D

Anywayz, have in mind this aspects for the next projects:
- Giving a concept to the vid, chosing a song that havn't been used much before;
- The AR thing i already said;
- Effect-wise: use effects only to give a personal touch on the vid or to help fulfilling the concept u proposed;
- Try asking/reding about video formats, so next time u render the vid on a way to keep the best possible quality. Btw, i can help u with it, tho i shall tell u it is not my speciality, lol, i know the basics tho.

All the rest u should learn with time.
I sugest u watch some nice videos and try to notice how the editors edited to them and learn from it. Also, don't try to reach certain levels in such a initial stage.

Good luck with your next works! :D

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Re: The challenge- My first AMV

Post by rolando90 » Tue Dec 23, 2008 3:32 am

Hey, Sephirothishere. Ty for your comment. It was pretty helpul.
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