Above the new world (Aniventure 2008 - best action)

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Above the new world (Aniventure 2008 - best action)

Post by simofc90 » Mon Nov 17, 2008 9:47 am

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And the idiot poster by mirkosp :lol:
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Thanks dude :>



Ok here's my new video originally edited for the second round of the "online tournament" by fantasy movie, it took me weetwo ks (the whole time they gave us).
You'd better read the comment before watching the video, because it could be hard to understand the theme or the storyline, I'd be happy to hear sincere opinions.
Enjoy it!
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Re: Above the new world (Aniventure 2008 - best action)

Post by mirkosp » Mon Nov 17, 2008 9:49 am

Thread rape?

PS: Simo, go die in a fire. :evil:

Good Stuff. :up:
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Re: Above the new world (Aniventure 2008 - best action)

Post by Magnus » Mon Nov 17, 2008 12:50 pm

You didn't display enough of how Light changed the world. Or how the world was at the moment, cause the life of one teen isn't the life of everyone.
I wouldn't had understood your concept if it wasn't for the text you wrote about the video.

So for your next video, remember scene selection is important.
To see if some one understands your concept send it to someone and tell them to tell you what they think the concept is.

Overall the editing was rather nice. Though nothing "WickedSick" =P
Keep it up buddy ^^
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Re: Above the new world (Aniventure 2008 - best action)

Post by dreamawake » Mon Nov 17, 2008 2:00 pm

/megets

Eh, sorry dude but I really couldn't get into this. There were a few segments that were amazing, but they were few and far between..I maybe liked about 20 seconds out of the whole video S:

I felt your concept was very weak, the lip sync wasn't really fitting imo, it felt pointless and gaudy. The pacing was way too slow most of the time, and the art styles of kid's story and Death Note differ way too much for you to be masking L into animatrix IMO.

Overall it's about a 2/5 from me, better luck next time
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Re: Above the new world (Aniventure 2008 - best action)

Post by MimS » Mon Nov 17, 2008 3:15 pm

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I have to admit you're fucking talented!
I like the idea for this video.
It sometimes lacks of "energy" but this doesn't matter, your work is very good!
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Re: Above the new world (Aniventure 2008 - best action)

Post by neorose » Tue Nov 18, 2008 3:33 am

Was better than I thought it was gonna be, which is not saying much do to my bad feeling about Death Note vids that are action themed(stop making them). I did like the Animatrix parts twas good and I did like the DN part toward the end of the vid that used the intro part of DN aside for that the lip sync parts just sucked. Could have been better with less Death Note in the vid. 3/5

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Re: Above the new world (Aniventure 2008 - best action)

Post by Falconone » Tue Nov 18, 2008 8:05 am

i dont know... i think the video looks strange with L, i think it could be better without him. He looked so different and doesnt fit really into the scenes. but ok the rest was not bad but i could be better. it was a long part of the anime so nothing such great for me. sorry dude 2.5/5
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Re: Above the new world (Aniventure 2008 - best action)

Post by Megamom » Tue Nov 18, 2008 9:23 pm

|:> Good Convination! ^^ 5/5
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Re: Above the new world (Aniventure 2008 - best action)

Post by pharaoh » Wed Nov 19, 2008 7:12 am

it could be better without the death note scenes
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Re: Above the new world (Aniventure 2008 - best action)

Post by simofc90 » Thu Nov 20, 2008 8:57 am

mirkosp wrote:Thread rape?

PS: Simo, go die in a fire. :evil:

Good Stuff. :up:
you for first :up:
ZetZu wrote:You didn't display enough of how Light changed the world. Or how the world was at the moment, cause the life of one teen 'tisn the life of everyone.
I wouldn't had understood your concept if it wasn't for the text you wrote about the video.

So for your next video, remember scene selection is important.
To see if some one understands your concept send it to someone and tell them to tell you what they think the concept is.

Overall the editing was rather nice. Though nothing "WickedSick" =P
Keep it up buddy ^^
Light didn't change the world with his die, I showed an episode of violence of the government but I know it was hard to understand without the introduction.
Thanks for the advice.
ArashinomeAMV wrote:/megets

Eh, sorry dude but I really couldn't get into this. There were a few segments that were amazing, but they were few and far between..I maybe liked about 20 seconds out of the whole video S:

I felt your concept was very weak, the lip sync wasn't really fitting imo, it felt pointless and gaudy. The pacing was way too slow most of the time, and the art styles of kid's story and Death Note differ way too much for you to be masking L into animatrix IMO.

Overall it's about a 2/5 from me, better luck next time
I see, thanks for said your opinion I really appreciate comments like this I'll do better next time. :up:
~MimS~ wrote:copy/paste:
I have to admit you're fucking talented!
I like the idea for this video.
It sometimes lacks of "energy" but this doesn't matter, your work is very good!
glad you liked it
neorose wrote:Was better than I thought it was gonna be, which is not saying much do to my bad feeling about Death Note vids that are action themed(stop making them). I did like the Animatrix parts twas good and I did like the DN part toward the end of the vid that used the intro part of DN aside for that the lip sync parts just sucked. Could have been better with less Death Note in the vid. 3/5
I thought these scenes fitted well with the music
Falconone wrote:i dont know... i think the video looks strange with L, i think it could be better without him. He looked so different and doesnt fit really into the scenes. but ok the rest was not bad but i could be better. it was a long part of the anime so nothing such great for me. sorry dude 2.5/5
I wanted to make a particular theme, but I couldn't do it without Light
Megamom wrote:|:> Good Convination! ^^ 5/5
Thanks!
pharaoh wrote:it could be better without the death note scenes
same reply as Falconone's one

thanks for the comments guys!
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