A Better Place, Syaoran's Only One, Yours To Hold

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Blazing Badger
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A Better Place, Syaoran's Only One, Yours To Hold

Post by Blazing Badger » Wed Sep 17, 2008 5:25 pm





I am kind of a lurker around here. After my first two videos hardly made a splash, I figured I should announce all of them. So out of lurk-dom I come to announce my videos. Please be very informative in your opinions, if you hate them tell me why, if you like them do the same. I can only improve by learning.
Thank you for your time.

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Kionon
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Post by Kionon » Wed Sep 17, 2008 5:52 pm

Getting the Clannad one.

Mmm... Nagisa.

The beginning was too slow for the audio, but at 00:45 it picked up.

I like it. PSP Clannad ftw.

4.5/5
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Post by LeapofFate » Wed Sep 17, 2008 5:59 pm

Kionon wrote:Getting the Clannad one.

Mmm... <strike>Nagisa</strike> Tomoyo.
gets clannad one too

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Post by CodeZTM » Wed Sep 17, 2008 7:14 pm

Holy crap. All three of those were good. :O

Nothing revolutionary or that's going to change the world, but they were all good watches, and worth the download. In my opinion of the videos, Clannad was the best one, followed by the Naruto one, and the finishing up with the Tsubasa one.

Really good work. :O

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Post by Niwa » Wed Sep 17, 2008 7:15 pm

I see Skillet O:

/gets

EDIT: They weren't bad at all :up:

Clannad Video: I was unsure about this song selection because Clannad doesn't hold much of the sentimental moments but you handle it pretty damn good. The effects were unecessary could've been better without em. Scene Selection and Character Profile wise was :up:

Naruto Video: I had to download this since it's Skillet :) as for the video it was nice. Nothing much more to say since you know how Naruto videos are these days.

Tsubasa Video: /downloading
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Post by pharaoh » Wed Sep 17, 2008 7:35 pm

got the naruto one

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Post by guy07 » Wed Sep 17, 2008 7:53 pm

dibs on teh sakura hawtness.
Edit: Awww, that was cute :3
A few flaws though:
Excessive use of overlays and effects, they are fine in moderation.
Sync needs to be a bit clearer, play the footage in vegas in slow-mo and check to make sure everything is synced right, you can also look at the peaks on the songs waveforms and match them with the clips.
Avoid using any type of cross fade other then a plain cross fade, you used the disolve one a lot and it wasn't very visually appealing.
Good work though. 3/5

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Re: A Better Place, Syaoran's Only One, Yours To Hold

Post by Vivaldi » Wed Sep 17, 2008 8:30 pm

The lack of starfish makes me sad, but the editing makes up for it. Good jorb :up:
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<Kenzichu> HAHAHA!!
<Kenzichu> everyone died!

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