My first 2 AMVs, a comedy and a parody

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My first 2 AMVs, a comedy and a parody

Post by zeiram_00 » Wed Sep 17, 2008 1:54 pm

Video: Flava of Kintaro
Category: Comedy, Fun
Anime: Golden Boy
Song: Fever for the Flava
Artist: Hot Action Cop

Video: Bastard D&D
Category: Comedy, Fun, Parody
Anime: Bastard!
Song: D&D Parody
Artist: Dead Alewives

Creator: zeiram_00
Please leave plenty of feedback to help me continue to improve my skills, thanks

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Re: My first 2 AMVs, a comedy and a parody

Post by Kionon » Thu Sep 18, 2008 3:54 am

zeiram_00 wrote:Video: Flava of Kintaro
Category: Comedy, Fun
Anime: Golden Boy
Song: Fever for the Flava
Artist: Hot Action Cop
Oooh. Golden boy ftw.

Also, vidid is your friend.


Edit: This has a very old school feel, and had some potential, but the quality is pretty bad. Your aspect ratio is off, you have some pretty bad interlacing, the macroblocking is very eight years ago. Content wise, I think the lip sync needs a lot more work, and you should probably make the transitions just a bit more updated, although we do not need need super effects, it would ruin the old school charm for me. Liked the concept, felt the execution was weak...
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Post by zeiram_00 » Thu Sep 18, 2008 3:17 pm

Kionon, and your opinion on my Bastard AMV?
(being my 2nd amv i believe i addressed some of the issues you mention and would like to know if i did indeed improve)

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