Keeper: Yuichi & Rika

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 2:15 pm

please excuse the crappy poster =/ batto has like gona bye bye and didnt make me one=/

dreamawake · Post by **dreamawake** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 2:24 pm

I woulda made you one you cockmongrel ;_;

Anyways, I'll check it out later cause its yellowcard and I do enjoyz some yellowcard

Flame-X · Post by **Flame-X** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 2:42 pm

better than ur first hanbun one

JaddziaDax · Post by **JaddziaDax** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 4:54 pm

Flame-X wrote:better than ur first one

he made his first one when I was still only 1 year old... how he got Naruto back then is beyond me :3 time travel I say O:

and

/me gets

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 4:56 pm

JaddziaDax wrote:
Flame-X wrote:better than ur first one
he made his first one when I was still only 1 year old... how he got Naruto back then is beyond me :3 time travel I say O:

lol I think he means my first hanban video not my first video

Serv0 · Post by **Serv0** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 5:02 pm

Shinodude, this was a lovely character tribute to both Yūichi and Rika. Some good character establishments and profiles are set into play here. And a little emotion can be found in the video as a whole, but not quite the perfect execution however.

0:11-0:29 I like a lot because it has a style of capturing moments in both of these characters lives. It also acts as a set up for the emotion that's "suppose" to come, but unfortunately the video doesn't quite deliver after the intro. In the future, be sure to take advantage of foreshadowing, and what you want the audience to anticipate.

In terms of content, not a lot has to offer, because the majority of the video is just close ups of the character's faces. In the future, be sure to involve more than faces, kissing, or people talking to each other. Is there something that's endangering the character's relationship, and how can you expand on it perhaps?

Overall, a 3/5 from me because it is average.

BTW, what's with the Air footage in the credits? That confused me a little.

ScorpionP · Post by **ScorpionP** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 5:05 pm

/gets =o

MycathatesyouAMV · Post by **MycathatesyouAMV** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 6:38 pm

JaddziaDax wrote:
Flame-X wrote:better than ur first one
he made his first one when I was still only 1 year old... how he got Naruto back then is beyond me :3 time travel I say O:

and

/me gets

Yea wth 0.0 just noticed that lol. 1982 Naruto 4tW!

aesling · Post by **aesling** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 7:26 pm

Good job Shino, I liked it. The editing was well done, and the mood was nice too, if a bit mellow. There was one scene though that looked like a repeat and I was like o_O

SF_Phoenix · Post by **SF_Phoenix** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 7:45 pm

The mood was good, but I couldn't catch the emotion too well in this. Part (or mostly) why might be because I haven't seen this series though. Having Air in the credits seemed a bit weird to me too. I think I may go watch this series now =)

3.5/5