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Post by Amo-Chan » Mon Nov 19, 2007 1:17 pm

No pretty picture this time. Photoshop crapped out on me.

Basically, I was trying to do a video with lots of movement to it. I've already typed up a bunch about the quality of the vid, so feel free to read that there.

As always, any advise is VERY helpful. Part of me feels like I've hit a brick wall with my avisynth and filtering ability.
And, enjoy and have fun!


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Post by Bauzi » Tue Nov 20, 2007 3:21 pm

not too bad. Catchy song, but maybe a bit too long. Oh let´s blame the artist for it! =P

I give you... 3.35/5

Nice editing. Not original. No effects (good point here. They would screw the vid).

Some details:
Keep on improving your editing and effort for an amv. Some parts should be timed different or better. Uhm yeah a particular question:
02:03 - 02:06 editor black out? It doesn´t work or work together in any kind.

Anime selection:
Fuck Deathnote here. Don´t you see that the dark colours doesn´t fit AT ALL to the rest? Take care about such things. Same to Claymore, but not soo strong.

Lipsync:
Do it good or leave it. Avoid flap lip sync if you can (scenes when people talk when nobody is singing or when they shouldn´t speak). Just put much much much more effort into here or leave it out.
You can find me on YT under "Bauzi514". Subscribe to never miss my AMV releases. :amv:

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Post by Amo-Chan » Tue Nov 20, 2007 3:28 pm

Bauzi wrote:not too bad. Catchy song, but maybe a bit too long. Oh let´s blame the artist for it! =P

I give you... 3.35/5

Nice editing. Not original. No effects (good point here. They would screw the vid).

Some details:
Keep on improving your editing and effort for an amv. Some parts should be timed different or better. Uhm yeah a particular question:
02:03 - 02:06 editor black out? It doesn´t work or work together in any kind.

Anime selection:
Fuck Deathnote here. Don´t you see that the dark colours doesn´t fit AT ALL to the rest? Take care about such things. Same to Claymore, but not soo strong.

Lipsync:
Do it good or leave it. Avoid flap lip sync if you can (scenes when people talk when nobody is singing or when they shouldn´t speak). Just put much much much more effort into here or leave it out.
Yes, I also blame the song. I actually cut a lot out of it. It's even longer.
I'm always trying to improve. Yay! I mostly made this for two reasons. I wanted to try to utilize movement in the actual anime footage (that's why I have the Death Note in here), and because my husband asked for Robotech. I'm still struggling with lipsync of any kind, but I have high hopes.
Thanks!

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Post by Autraya » Tue Nov 20, 2007 5:52 pm

moar mechs less other series ;)
it's good to see some older sources being used :up:
new banzors in the making :p

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Post by Amo-Chan » Tue Nov 20, 2007 6:01 pm

Autraya wrote:moar mechs less other series ;)
it's good to see some older sources being used :up:
My husband said the same thing. He's lucky I used it at all. I'm not a fan. I probably could have used more Robotech, but I didn't want a video that was just airplanes flying and things exploding :lol: It was fun to do though.

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