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Post by Melichan923 » Mon Nov 12, 2007 7:33 pm



I finally uploaded a new video! :D I'm pretty sure this will be my last Advent Children video for a very long time. I spent a while trying to get this the way I wanted it. I hope someone enjoys it. :)
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Post by Melichan923 » Mon Nov 12, 2007 9:22 pm

I'm sorry everyone! I had to request a file deletion for my video because there was a very annoying glitch that appeared which doesn't appear in the uncompressed version. I think I know what it's from, so my video will be up again either later tonight or tomorrow afternoon. I wish I had noticed this sooner! :oops:
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Post by Melichan923 » Mon Nov 12, 2007 11:11 pm

Things should be all set now. I apologize again for that! :D Same as before:
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Post by Emong » Tue Nov 13, 2007 10:53 am

That wasn't too bad. It didn't really stand out from the crowd, being your average AC video with a slightly better beat sync than most of them have. I like the black flashing for the fast drums beats. You could have, and you should have, done it some more to keep it more up-beat though..

The thing about most AC videos is that the action scenes are all screwed-up. The characters are jumping around randomly and the action just doesn't make sense when you re-arrange clips from a certain fight scene. Good AC videos manage to avoid this problem but yours didn't, I'm afraid. You gotta have sense in your action ;)

It was a decent video with a nice sense of flow but the song was too fast (or too heavy) for the beat sync on this video. It didn't manage to keep up properly.. Better than most AC vids~ :up:

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Post by Melichan923 » Tue Nov 13, 2007 2:31 pm

Thank you very much for watching and replying, Emong! :)

About the flashes and effects: I didn't want to do an effect for every single beat of the song because I thought it might take away from the meaning, but maybe I was wrong. :sweat:

The action sync: Ah, yes. I realized that was in the back in my mind now that you pointed it out. I tried to concentrate on matching the lyrics up to the video too much maybe. It's possible I could have just chosen a different scene so people aren't like "Hey, how did it go from that to that so quickly!?" :P

I will definitely take those things into consideration, especially if I make another Advent Children video. Thanks for the descriptive and friendly advice. I'm sure it will help me out a lot. :) I need to know what I'm doing so I can make things right.
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