The awaken

dmiano · Post by **dmiano** » Mon Aug 27, 2007 11:26 pm

This is the second amv of claymore that i´ve made, its edited with cuts from the manga, the band`s music video and of course from the anime. Please enjoy and post comments . Thanks.

OropherZero · Post by **OropherZero** » Tue Aug 28, 2007 1:57 am

ah damn I knew eventually someone would use within temptation for Claymore, so I shall give this amv a go XD

Emong · Post by **Emong** » Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:47 am

So, I downloaded it.. The clips were nicely chosen to fit the mood, but the lack of a proper concept is visisble here, and why didn't your cuts and other transitions go with the music? O.o Seriously, it looked like you just tossed clips together without actually placing them. It bothered me because this could have been MUCH better as a whole if the sync was better.

3/5

OropherZero · Post by **OropherZero** » Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:58 am

on a visual perspective, you presented a gothic atmosphere well, however I do not feel that you integrated the band's MV footage well enough, it disrupted the flow of the AMV to me, rather than add to it, yet in saying that, it was an interesting idea, as was adding in the claymore manga - probably needed more motion here, as the song is very dynamic, i didnt have any problems with the synch as it was a mood synched amv to me, so yeah if you minused the real footage and added more of the anime I could appreciate the story or concept of the AMV more, but while I was trying to identify this, the footage would disrupt my thinking process. Anyway you get a 7.5/10 from me for an interesting idea and presentation =)

Edit: Actually ignore the part about taking out the MV footage, I just think you used it too much, and also the manga parts were fine as they are.