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therealTINKER
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Post by therealTINKER » Fri Aug 17, 2007 4:38 am




This is my first video. Done With Blood the first Vampire and Flyleaf.
Please leave opinions or advice. Hope you like it. Thank you

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Post by Scaledkittah » Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:04 pm

*downloads* Never seen Blood, but certainly curious now. That said.

Loved the start, though the clip of the door opening around 0:15 is a bit short to really see the bodies behind it. I'd say either remove it or try to borrow a few frames from the clips before it to make that shot longer.

Blank frame at 0:29, Intentional?

1:20: Though it doesn't bug me much, and I didn't see it till my 3rd viewing, the lip flap here will probably get a few points docked.

1:34: The Sync seems just slightly off at the clip change. But could just be me.

1:51 onward: Haven't played with effects much myself, but the little flashes of color and the slowdown fit the beat and the mood of the song at that point quite well. Though media player had a square of 'flim noise' I guess you could call it, black dots like old flim clip in the middle, but clear footage off to both sides. Not sure if it's a glitch on my end or an editing one, but it was slightly distracting.

2:30-2:47ish My only real nitpick, the action doesn't really seem to match the lyrics.

Overall though? Good song, decent sync, the music fit the clips well, even if a couple seemed fillersh. Helluva better first try then mine was. :P

3.5/5 ^_^
In any case young babies are easy, say compared to a mobile two year old. AKA a compact engine of apocolyptic destruction.

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